|Reviews for A Shadow of the Titans|
| Ressan 5/17/13 . chapter 4
Nice chapter, will Jade eventually be able to summon shadowkhans.
| Ressan 5/17/13 . chapter 3
Nice chapter, tought Jade age should hinder greatly any physical test.
| Ressan 5/17/13 . chapter 2
| Ressan 5/17/13 . chapter 1
| flameslavier 5/5/13 . chapter 9
This story is very interesting
Also bringing my two favorite shows togeter
Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter
| GameJunkie7 5/3/13 . chapter 9
This story is beyond awesome and whoever made Gadjo is a FUCKING genius! He's great! He's the stereotypical huge powerhouse only he detracts from it slightly enough with his girth and the fact that he's intelligent but just plain crazy.
Also for reference, I believe it's Romani not Romany to refer to the "gypsy" people who wandered most of Europe and Eurasia.
As for this last one I especially love the focus on how Jade's progress in becoming something she wasn't before is going. It would just be so much easier if she just accepted the truth but instead she's going down swinging, doesn't Jade realize that she's only going to make things harder on herself and could potentially create a multiple-personality disorder issue with this?
Anyway I love this and I would love to see more.
| Zhor 5/3/13 . chapter 9
Excellent chapter and character development. Looks like Jade's about to get a new enemy.
| Ander Arias 4/30/13 . chapter 9
I've been reading this story for the last few days after I saw it on TVTropes, and boy, it's awesome! I acutally love both shows, even I could only watch a handful of TT chapters (but most of the JCA ones).
I really like the plot you had going on there. Instead of using the cliché of Jade joining the Titans, you made her a villainess against her will, which adds a lot of depth to the story, plus it creates plenty of interesting scenarios (like somw we already saw). Still, it almost looks like Jade fits better with the HIVE bunch, since she doesn't seem to like the Titans on a personal level (well, except Raven). Her rivalry with BB was also really good and funny.
You are one of the few authors that use OCs but don't make ther the center of their story (which is the only way I like to both read and write about OCs), and kudos for that. Gadjo is pure comedic gold, but most psychos in fiction are, like the Joker or Kefka.
At first I thought that it was a bit exagerated the way Jade snaps when somebody ticks her, answering with fire blast and such, but then I realized something: Jade behaves just in the same way a preteen with magic powers and no adult supervision would, but you nicely adressed that in her conversation with the Queen. Is those kind of details that differentiates a good story of a great one.
So far, I haven't found any flaw to complain about, but maybe I will after future rereads. I will wait eagerly for the next chapter. Good job!
| MangamanZX 4/29/13 . chapter 9
Zhu chan... Not much of a change from her real name... I also like the BB JC tease thrown in there :)
| patrick the almighty observer 4/23/13 . chapter 9
okay this is rather exciting, i wish there was more to it but you have a lot of other stories that your working on. still what is here is good, their is an interesting relationship between Jinx and Jade, hard to pinpoint what it is but its blatantly platonic and I'm happy about that, i do have to wonder if blood has his weird mind control powers in this story as that could make things rather complicated. Also are you going to do the episode where Cyborg joined the H.I.V.E. undercover. it might be interesting (though i would rather see how far of a villain Jade will become before something that might get her on the good guys side happens)
| Guest 4/17/13 . chapter 9
Periodicly shows sighn that your not dead update queen of shadows a tale accross ages
| Guest 4/17/13 . chapter 9
A random bad guy name pop in my head if kitten transform into whatever that killer moth put in he will very happy if put in your story the name that pop out is caterkiller
| Boris Yeltsin 4/11/13 . chapter 1
Who was that guy? Love the idea.
| oldtimeydude 4/10/13 . chapter 9
Alright, hopeful for some Shadowkhan action! Lets get some in there!
| oldtimeydude 4/10/13 . chapter 2
Oooh, another of the Dark Jade Project. Haven't seen one of these in a long while!
I rather like the Jade you put out, Shadowkhan!Jade; though without the Shadowkhan themselves... I have to wonder on that point. As well as Jade suddenly speaking Japanese when she is Chinese, could be explained away as the Shadowkhan influences. I also am loving the way you introduced her to the world with the talismans! Have them basically absorbed into her without them being all the way in! I look forward to what more you have for us