I cried! It takes alot to get me 2 cry so ur lucky kinda...I guess...lolz well I absolutely loved it!Altho this chapter kinda confused me.

I like the ending you gave this though at first there were mixed feelings: it ruins it cause its like a cheap ending but at the same time it gives a twist that makes evrything okay at least for now while explaining some points in more depth. I did really like the 2nd chapter that was the actual 'novel' although highly depressing it seriously worked.

There were good points all the way through, though the first chapter and in a lesser sense the 2nd were very long-winded in places and slightly boring. One thing I will say is that (in 1st chapt especially) you often ended up with several 'he' or 'him' references in one sentence, which led to a fair amount of confusion about who you were talking about. And the scene in the jewellry shop with Psy made very little sense as to how she fitted in. Its like there was a chunk of writing missing from there or something.

Otherwise though it was pretty good fiction.

You should of let Shuichi lived! *nods head*

awesome just awesome

I LOVED IT!

I was so suprise, when I realised it was a story that Yuki had written.

I liked the why you wrote it.

it was really good fyi i was confused as well*snickers*

... ;_;!
I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY! REALLY LIKE IT, I DO! *bows down to it*
I've also read your sequel, which... hasn't been updated in... what, two years? ; But that's okey!
Whatta kawaii/sad story! ;; But did that mean that CB and Psy were made up? Cuz the names are... strange, and the thought of Yuki naming his characters that is funneh. "Crazy Bitch". xDD;
Off I go to read more of thy fics! *bounces off*

LUV IT! IT HAD EVERYTHING! AND IT WAS SO SWEET AND TRAGIC! KEEP WRITING MORE OF THIS KIND oF STORIES! SPECIALLY YUKI/SHUICHI! TAKE CARE! take care! .ag.(.)bytes.

OMG... It's so bittersweet! I swear I was balling my eyes out during it. Took me some time to recover too... It was beautiful.

Your story is fresh and interesting but unfortunately u consistently misspelled the word 'quiet' (u spelled it quite). The same goes for your other gravi fanfic (the one with 28 chaps). Anyway keep up the good work

*sighs happily* a nice happy ending that isnt cheesy, I was crying through the first two chapters, it was so sad! Glad ryuichi stuck with tatsuha, I love that pairing! Anyway, great fic!

oh my god. that was the best story i have ever read. when yuki started to read the news clipings from shuichi's diary, i started crying. i honest to god started to cry, and i never cry. i am so glad that you made it the way you did. if you wouldn't have made it out to be a book instead of real life, i probably would have started crying again :). wow. that was so good. you really need to write more. at first i wasn't going to read it because there wasn't much of a discription to it, but now im very glad i did. please write more! oh, and congratulations on making me cry. only you and 'i need you' by pupu are stories that i have every cried over. that was really good, now go write more!

_ Dude, that was an awesome ficcer. _ Very very spiffyful. _ Well written. Excellent. _ ! XD _

OOOOOO

That story was fantastic! loved every bit of it! well that's 1/2 hour of my life well spend!

heh. You really are a great writer! *puts my writing to shame* XD oh well...i'll just watch and learn..._

OMG...that was soooo superb ... I loved the plot, the twist ending, everything! :)