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Wow, I can't believe that you've updated after like two years! Haha I love this, and I love your writing style, so I hope that you'll continue with this. :)

Anyway, I can't wait until your next update! Update soon!

Have a great day :)

Just as great as the last, if not more humane and insightful to just what is going on in Aqua's mind. There tension of her training and Vanitas are a very nice touch! :P

I think I'm in love with your writing style. :) This is so good. I love how you're writing Aqua so...human. I guess this takes place a few years before BBS but it's refreshing to see her as a badass in training, instead of a straight up badass, lol. I like how you're exploring her doubts and moments of weakness.

That fight sequence with Vanitas was crazy good. Reading fight scenes usually kind of bores me to be honest but I really got into that one. I love the idea of him building Aqua up to be the spare. Everyone seems really in character, even Master E and Xehanort who seem like they'd be really hard to write. And I don't know why but I LOVE reading about the training activities they have to do, lol it's just really interesting to me for some reason. But man, Eraqus is intense! He works those kids hard...but then again, I guess they've gotta be able to bring it if they want to be masters one day.

Hoping this turns into a Terra/Aqua/Vanitas triangle, and that we see Ven soon! I'm getting a Vanitas/Aqua vibe already but not sure if that's where you're going with this. Either way, it's well-written and interesting enough that I'll continue reading regardless. You're off to a great start! I'm definitely faving.C an't wait for the next chapter! :)

Would have loved a continuation of this, the description of both Aqua and Vanitas was interesting to say the least. Sad to see you only have this only chapter, but oh well, glad that its still on here :)

I love how you decribe Vanitas. You got him 100%!

Anyway, A story! Loved it to death!

This was really good! I liked all the action and you captured their personalities perfectly! :)