That was so beautiful. Thank you!

Best. This was perfect

Love getting this alert. The first part of the story was wonderfully told. After meeting Esme, the story was condensed and I'd like to have you expand the story a little more. Though it is cool to have the whole story arc all at once including a happy ending. The "I love you" website and engagement scenes were pretty neat.

Whoa, a shallow Esme, that's new. It took until the birth of their first child for her to warm up to Bella. Ouch.

another great story! here I am at 2am and cant stop reading your stories! LOL I cant believe how Esme acted in this one. what a bitch

This is a great story. I really like Geekward stories that aren't totally horny and showcase intelligence.

This is sweet.

I was shocked by Esme's prejudice against Bella. I guess Esme can't always be perfect!

I enjoyed the contrast of these two and how they made sense when together.

I liked the lesson in the story too.

I just found your OS, and the story took my breath away. Loved it! Very realistic, well written, sweet Edward, etc,etc,etc.

Thank you for sharing with us!

well... I wasn't expecting Esme to be a biatch but it really fit givin the story so overall 2 thumbs up!

Aww.. Great story I loved it. It was sweet and romantic! Great job!

Aw this was really sweet :)

i just wanted to say this story was adorable. you did a great job and had a great theme.

Fantastic story!

So very sweet. Loved it.

XXX

Whit

Sensational! Amazing! Superb! It was a great read with every word just as addictive as the last.

I thoroughly enjoyed my time.

I love Edward from start to finish..

Your Bella was perfect, she was just what he needed in his life and I love his awakening especially when he stood to his mother, I was doing fist pumps while read that! I was so fucking proud of him!

Thank you so fucking much for writing!

Great job, I loved it. I have never really read one where Edward's parents didn't approve of Bella, that was a nice change.