I'm sorry but not to say this but...I LOVED IT! I don't know why but I love tragedy, aspecialy if it involves the Elrics. I hare the mushy-gushy stuff.

I also hate Winry, and love how you portray her in this fic.

Awesome job dude or dude-et.

You should see my face, I'm smiling cuz this fic was amazing in concept, format, and writing, shocked cuz of the intense plotline and ending, and crying CUZ IT'S SO SAD! IT WAS AWESOME! But seriously, my face is scary right now. :3

This story, i suppose, would suck without the ending. Cos I was reading it and thinking, okay, Edward talks to the ghosts of his brother and mother, but isn't all the rest just pointless abuse, but I read to the end, and I'm so glad I did, cos it really was amazing. And you were right, and I was so wrong.

The whole abuse, talking to ghosts thing really tied up well, and just the simple act of him finding them again made it very awesome.

The only complaint I had was that it had sort of lost that essence of Edward. He was sort of soul-less, with no spunk, and I know most people wouldn't have after all of that, but the only little glimmer i got was when he tells Will, i think it was outside the door, that he's still alive

And this is why you should always read to the end of books!

BS

The ending is so touching.

This is the best story ive ever made me cry through most of it. bravo you made a 12 year old boy cry, in a good way! Im serious about it being te best 1 ever...DAMIT THERES TEARS ON MY KEY

Now this, *sniffles* was an awesome story! Hope you like cookies! *Hands you a box of cookies*

Omfg! I loved it!

Very well done! :D

made me cry :') in the good way. very original. i never would've thought about what would happen if Hohenheim married Dante first and had a kid. WHY DID YOU KIL AL? D: I almost cried then, too. AND THE ABUSE! what a monsrosity! but i loved it all the same :) Good work, and write more!

Mortichai

wha? it was so sad, yet so happy! well, at the end at least. bravo! i loved it!

Interesting. This is creative and original. I like the ideas, but I did think it was quite twisted.

Well done on a great story!

TwT que bonito! aunque sea tan triste esta tan bonito el fic. Pobre Ed que lo haces sufrir, y que tortura para alguien vivir esa clase de vida.

Gracias por la buena historia, escribes muy pero muy bien

*claps and FUCKIN cries*...That was the best story EVER! I am having emotional breakdown, it was soooo sad!

wow... that was soooooo touching! I love it even though it's AU you make it seems soooo real!

but though, why did you made winry a b****? well, anyways... I love it! fav!

Too much. Too much. Oh god, too much tears...I'm sorry. It was beautiful. I'll go check out your other stories now. :)