Wow this was just amazing. The way you write...well it just blows me away. You have an amazing talent this of course is going into my favorites list.

I Like it

i'm crying! wow. more please!

This story actually made me cry. That's the effect your writing has on people. Please carry on writing because trust me when I say this you got more reviews than I ever did on my stories and that obviously because of your great skill on writing.

This was stunning. An amazing piece of fiction, and damn, did you ever manage to make me tear up and reminisce about the long-lost greatness that was (is) BL.

Brooke has always been my favorite on OTH, and of course Sophia Bush's fantabulous-ness is a contributing factor, but it's her character that gets to me. A character you developed and wrote with pitch-perfect clarity. This is Brooke, in her deepest, darkest moments. It's raw, it's beautiful, and it's perfect.

Because really, was there ever a more perfect pair on OTH other than BL? (Though I am partial to NH). You captured them here, their dynamic, their separate yet wholly complete halves of a whole. I am so in love with this.

My favorite line? A tie between "Tutor-boyfriend doesn't have the same effect that tutor-wife does!"and "Because by now he knows that the slutty cheerleader is just a facade that hides the beautiful, brilliant, but vulnerable girl he loves."

Because one made me burst out in giggles, and the other made me tear up slightly.

I had a feeling he was dead, but I was really hoping I was wrong! Soooooo sad! Amazing job!

GREAT STORY, SAD BUT GREAT STORY.

I REALLY LIKE IT. LIKE REALLY REALLY LIKE IT.

YOU DID A GREAT JOB WRITTING IT.

BRACHEL AND BALEY AMAZING AS ALWAYS AND I LIKE THAT SHE PUT PEYTON IN HER PLACE.

BOTTOM LINE IS I REALLY LIKE IT.

You're an amazing writer. I've told you this multiple times and my opinions never gonna change. I hope one day your work becomes known . Publish a book or something wont ya? :)

that was so sad i was crying at the end! loved the flash backs

I did like it even if it's a really sad story.

OMG! That was SO sad but so GOOD! Can't wait for more of this!

love this one shot

This story just made me cry! I think that you wrote it really well and it's just so sad and thought provoking! Well done on a great oneshot :)