|Reviews for Cloverfield: The Return of the Monster 2: DeathDay|
| Guest 2/4/13 . chapter 1
u r so stupid I've read better storys than this I bet a new born can write better than this I've seen the movie this is nonthing like this please just stop the storys now
| Guest 12/3/12 . chapter 1
Is this a joke?
| Guest 7/17/12 . chapter 1
hey dude, it was a good attempt. is english your first language? anyway, dont let the other guys put you down. if you want to be an author some day just keep practicing and don't give up. i believe in you man! (or woman)
| Celtic Ceilidh 3/21/12 . chapter 1
I wanted to give this one a chance because I love Cloverfield, but I couldn't even get past the first few paragraphs. Your spelling and grammar are appalling. My 10 year old has a better grasp of spelling and grammar than you do. No, I'm not joking.
I went to your profile page to check, in case this fic was some sort of deliberately badly written parody. And much to my sadness, it turns out that this is the way you write ALL your stories. You say you want to be an author one day? Seriously? That won't ever happen unless you grasp simple spelling and grammar first. A publisher won't even look at your work if you cannot bother to fix the simplest spelling mistakes. Honestly. *heavy sigh*
| Guest 3/12/11 . chapter 1
Sonya Li is badass xD
| mason 2/17/11 . chapter 1
hes right you know
| Josky 11/6/10 . chapter 1
Really? You still think you have talent? Fail.