You, again, have me in awe! This was so amazing! So dark and haunting! I love it! Now it must go in my favs! :D

Very well-written story, and as you already pointed out it did indeed become an incredibly dark story. One particular sentence really caught my attention: "we are both in love with the same man" it really 'pulled me' into the story.

Well done!

-Bill

Whoah! You've somehow managed to make me feel for three characters I really don't like at all. That there's the sign of an excellent writer! Keep up the awesome work!

Also, I like the different font formats you used for Raphael and Cassandra. Added to the ethereal effect of the whole thing.

Holy crap I couldn't stop reading. I hung onto every word, I honestly don't know what the heck to say to convey just how good-well, good in a scary way-this was. You were not kidding about it being dark!

Excellent excellent excellent job, I apologize for being at such a loss for words!

This took my breath away with every word! The way you present the characters is deliciously dark and I especially love how Raphael is depicted.

You're an amazing writer!