|Reviews for The First Sin|
| Princess LaLaBlue 7/29/12 . chapter 3
I know that you wrote this a while ago, but I had to tell you that this was a very beautiful and very well thought out story. I came here because I had been seeing a lot of the Thrax/Odette pairings on youtube too, and I needed to see if there was a fanfiction for it, and boy I was not disappointed. You have a very unique style, so again, thanks for the great read!
| choxie-chan 6/21/12 . chapter 1
Oh my GOD 3 this is amazing! a wonderful done fanfic of this lovely pair! I really got into this fic, and enjoyed it all the way through! :O Great Job! I would love to read more of your works! :3
| IHeart2896 7/15/11 . chapter 2
I watch thrax for one day and the next minute I demand to read stuff about him then I see this and it made me love thrax more. This was just so amazing! So descriptive and amazing!
| DeviousxXxSmile 12/21/10 . chapter 2
Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant!
There isnt enough fanfiction with Thrax and I just looked in the crossover section out of pure desperation.
Best. Decision. Ever.
If you write more Thrax/Odette (or Thrax/Anyone, really), I would SO be the first to read it! (or second, or third...you know, depending on when I find out...or...if you actually DO write some more...Which I hope you do...*wink, wink, nudge,nudge*
| Jackie-Chaos-Bunny 12/17/10 . chapter 2
Good God, this was so deep, dark, lustful, and entrancing... and I LOVED every minute of it!
BTW, I lol'd at the name meanings!
'Thrax (American): an incredibly licentious devil; creature full of sexual appeal (That should be what it means! XD)'
A-freaking-men to THAT!
| Akilah 11/17/10 . chapter 3
That was poetically deep!
| thraxbaby 11/7/10 . chapter 2
| MikomiShizuka 11/3/10 . chapter 2
Oh. My. God. THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVARRRRR.
I love you. xDD
I'm nearly speechless so I can't think of anything else to say.