Very clever. And very steamy!

This story reminds me of the wonderful glow of Dandelion Wine but has the tragic feeling of unfulfillable dreams. If only we could go back to those dandelion wine nights. Catching up on some of your stories tonight has reminded me once again of what an amazing contribution you have made to DA fanfic.

Audra: That was soo good.

Kallisto: Yeah it was.

Audra: You have real talent.

Kallisto: Audra can't even spell it

Beautiful. I love the sharing dreams part. Sigh.

Very nicely done as always. It's good to have you back. You wove the dream between them seamlessly, each blending into the other. Very effectively done. I'm glad to see you writing again. You've been missed. Now to go read the other story I saw your name next to the other day... Keep up the great work :)

Wow. This was beautifuuly written, a nice shipper fix for those of us who have been dying for any little crumb. How wonderful! And tortured at the same time.

AWSOME I HOPE YA WRITE MORE I WOULKD LOVE TO READ MORE...KEEP IT UP :)

I love this story.
Nothing more to say than that, now excuse me, I'm going to read all you're other fic...

you are a very, very talented writer

This is so good. I loved it. I really needed a good M/L shipper fic. You are quite a talented writer--the imagery and the way the words flow is quite beautiful. Keep writing!

Yet more proof of why I think you're one of the best fic writers around! This was so beautiful and so needed right now. There has been such a drought of good M/L fics. You couldn't have come back at a better time! I love the twist this takes from Logan's pov/dream to Max's. A nice surprise. Your stories always flow so nicely. I love your descriptivness. Beautiful and poignant words, yet your lines about them wanting each other and loving each other so but not ever being able to be together.....so heartbreaking. Beautiful writing as usual!

It is so beautiful & so very needed right now.

Please write more Max & Logan. You have such a way with these two very special characters.

I had tears in my eyes before I finished reading.

Thank you so much.

it's good i like how you've portrayed so much emotion. but i don't like this hole virus thing.

Oh god, this is painful... Damn writers. This was a beautiful fic, but it's not fair that someone should have to write like this. "wondering, not for the first time, if his dreams would ever rise from the dust of their afterglow." Exquisite. Excellent. Wonderful fic from my shippy heart.