This story doesn't scare me, but it made me sad and teary eye a couple of times...I wonder what happen to "the boy with the brown hair"

Wow...creepy. O.o

I'm just having a hard time wrapping my head around the idea of a ghost Kairi. But it's a good story, and nicely written.

could be interpreted multiple ways... but i guess, in a way, that adds to it. haha nice :D

I liked Kairi as a ghost and the way you wrote her stream of thoughts. The only thing that was bothering me was that you kept changing your tenses when, from what I could tell, you meant to stay in present tense.

poor kairi. always rejected :(

creepy! i love the halloween theme. very disturbing in the right ways.

Oh my gosh...that's beautiful. Gorgeous. Just so poetic and brilliant!

Namine just wants some company. Still, I can't fault Sora for avoiding her. I wouldn't want to be around her when gets upset. I guess that while Namine was unconscious, Sora grew up and had a family of his own. I guess Sora really liked the house. Otherwise, he would have moved out of their by now.