Wooaaa .. Finnally i can finish to translate this story . (my bad english Xp), altough i cant completely understand each word Lol, but i can understand the story and the way D&L kills her victims, and that make me afraid to the writer LOl v .. Overall this story is good and i like the way u write it..

You write well DarkIce. Well, would you try another theme like fantasy not made for gore? But hey, this isnt bad at all. The way D&L killed people rocks. Haha.. Did you write the script of saw? lmao* But overall, this is a good write up. Thank you for sharing! :D

-Nica

(evil thought )Hehehe I know what to do. Make one part Link x samus so you can torture them both mentally and phisicaly...oh and I AM sadistic lol

Mmm turtle stew.

Though the sequence with Ganondork was confusing.

Hi. :D Weird font.. o-o Gratz on finishing chapter 3! I finally read it and no I didn't throw up reading it. 3 Pro storys. :P Yay, it's the weekend and i'm bored again. xD I think you spelled star wrong in one of the sentences tho cuz it said "He had already tried to collect all seven of the crystal starts but he never did because of the meddling Mario." o.o Overall great story line. -pokes- RANDOMNESS FTW :)

D&L is your character, i guess... I like how this turned out-with big words and such that i constantly search up for meanings. I do hope that someone will not die already, but it cannot be helped as it is a horror story. Plot is nice, I will go onto milady's story now...weee

Absolutely fantasmic, cuzzie.

Of course, Wario's death here is frankly less gruesome than his death in mine. The level in how grotesque the deaths are about the same, and I can't say much. Nothing makes a better fanfic than one about death and so forth, right?

Also, making fun of Wario's face and his height? A-ma-ziiiiing.

I vote that Mario dies next, m'kay? But he better not die in a prissy way, I want something terrible just like Wario's death.

On to the Story Review itself :

Has a few missing words that could be easily fixed in a quick update, but your vocabulary words even it out.

Kuro