This story looks good but I can't get over the name change. Eerin Beaumont? I just can't : /

hm? im confused after reading the first few lines. William Darcy is the husband of Lizze Bennet, correct?

Good story. Long. Very emotional. I did not like Eerin all that much. I felt she was very selfish. Her expectations and demands of Darcy were unfair to him. He gave her so much and she kept asking for more. Yes, he was selfish to an extent too, but the fact that she would not return to him because he would not give up his career was a bit too much, imho. Enjoyed the Australian setting. I wish Victor and Carol would have gotten a little justice. Nice to hear that Richard and Maddie were able to find some happiness.

Honestly speaking, I hate you right now. I've utterly been taken in by what you wrote that I was willing to go 2 sleepless nights to finish it. My eyes are so tired from crying that I'm sure it will be swollen when I wake up. I'm a really big fan of yours. I normally don't even comment no matter how good the writer is but seeing as you have reduced me to tears (all night long if I might add) I felt it my responsibility to tell you... YOU ARE AWESOME! I have read and reread your other Pride and Prejudice stories as well and I can assure you, I have had to change my pillow case thanks to you. I sincerely hope that you get to publish your own story very soon and wish you the best of luck in making it big. I'd buy it myself but I am not of the same continent nor of legal age to be allowed to purchase it online. Nonetheless, it brings me great pleasure to have read your stories and I'm looking forward to any new stories you might be willing to show us.

P.S. I'd like it very much if you'd tell me what ever happened to Carol and Graham. If you ever around to reading this, please be kind enough to include it perhaps on your profile or an author's note. Anything to help satiate my curiosity. Good day.

Woah... This was such an amazing story! I was hooked from the very beginning! You took us on an awesome journey; the plot had many twists-and-turns, which I really liked. Great job!

P.S. I love these lines:

"Plato's Parables aside, men and women were not made of one sphere and split apart from birth. They were perfect for each other because they had smoothed down edges and clicked patterns and routines together, not because they were made that way. And there were still things that they would argue over throughout the rest of their days. 'Happily ever after' was not always 'completely without flaws.'"

Love your story. I a question what are boylegs?

"So if you have any intention of giving anything less than your all for this class, get out now, and save yourself the next two hours of time that can surely be spent zapping your brains with youtube on the library computers,"

Decepticon.

This story is so cute! I live in Brisbane, so it's really fun to be able to understand the shops and places you are referencing. Like Max Brenner, I haven't been to it yet just because it's always so damn busy, but this story is quickly making me realise I should make a trip there. I also know what Myer is and I don't know why, but I started laughing when the girls went there, it was just so weird to find it in the story! But on another note, I am loving this story and Darcy. I love Eerin's quick wit and her fearless attitude. I can't wait to read more!

I absolutly LOVED the ending. It was the perfect way to end it. Your writing is incredible. I hope that you and your family are doing well.

Love from a belated fan,

Suni

Your formal sounds awesome. I wish my prom was like that. The best we got was when one guy brought a nerf gun. *eye roll* And yeah we call in prom in the US.

I'm going to start by saying that you should consider this a review to all of your P&P stories (as well as The Hill). I read Love and Other Labels, which I was going to review, but I found myself unable to get enough of your writing, so I decided to read all of your stories first. Let me just say that your writing has such spark and flair that makes everything you do so enjoyable to read, it's all very witty, beautifully structured/written, you have excellent spelling/grammar and the dialogue flows really well. The crafting of your characters is brilliant and I really hope that I can enjoy more of your writing in the future. Seriously, you're an amazing writer and whatever you are working on, I truly hope it's something you never stop doing.

I have just read this whole modernisied Pride & Prejudice in a few sittings between marking papers and have really enjoyed it. I loved that it was set in Australia with a lot of the icons that I know and that I was able to imagine the characters walking through familiar settings. I loved the humour that pervaded through the narration and expressed through through the dialogue. I am a first generation Australian with Italian and French parents so I really also appreciated that the characters were a true representation of our multicultural population. Lastly, I hope this doesn't sound patronising because that is not my intention, but I cannot believe that you were 17 when you completed this. Your writing has maturity and complexity, and as an English/Cultural Studies teacher I was surprised and really impressed. Please keep writing and I look forward to reading more of it. All the best, Inspired x

Hey Evie,

I am not going to give you a detailed review or anything. I just wanted to say I loved the story, you are, in my opinion, a good writer though I guess you still have a lot 2 learn 2. Good luck with the rest of your fanfics, I might read a couple of them 2 although I don't review very much. please continue writing and I wish you a lot of strength with your apparent family troubles.

yours sincerely,

NMPPJ

That was a LOVELY chapter. Finally, they have reached a relationship of sorts. )

I love Maddy's "talk" with Darcy! D I like where this is going. A nice new change from canon. (,)