 James Birdsong 2009-10-04 . chapter 30 Cool. *nod* |
 zigmas 2009-07-23 . chapter 30Skipped the most part of it - shall read later.
But I'm sure it's pretty good. :D |
 zigmas 2009-07-22 . chapter 2:D |
 Frog-kun 2008-12-08 . chapter 30A great end to a great story! Maybe after this I'll read and review some of your other fics.
I liked this line:
'“Today, a common enemy and a future yet to be decided. Yesterday...should not be tampered with.”'
I think perhaps you could have gone a little more in-depth with this idea, as it strikes me as being a good thing for this story. It was very fun. Above all, this story is fun. I honestly enjoyed reading it.
See ya! |
 Frog-kun 2008-12-08 . chapter 29Wooho! Go the Backlash Wave! Looking up, I realise this story was written a while ago. That means no Adamant Barrage.
Karasu is definitely an interesting villain. I like how in the world, you've left it to us to interpret her motives. I think perhaps she's everything: she is evil, she is cowardly, she is vengeful. And it's so nice to see that you haven't made her become good towards the end. That would have just ruined it.
I should have said this a while ago but... Interesting how Karasu was actually after the Silence Glaive (i.e Hotaru) and not really the Shikon Jewel after all. Naraku ought to take a couple of tricks out of her book. Ha.
Looking forward to having a looksee at that epilogue. But then I'll be done with this story :( |
 Frog-kun 2008-12-08 . chapter 28The omake in this chapter provided some much-needed comic relief. I was starting to think maybe the story was taking itself a bit too seriously.
Anyhow... You know something? This story encouraged me to read the Sailor Moon manga, something I never thought I would do because I always considered Sailor Moon a cartoon as juvenile as The Power Puff Girls. But Sailor Moon has a lot more depth than that. So thank you! |
 Frog-kun 2008-12-08 . chapter 27I'm surprised at the amount of character development in this. Usually in a fic like this, the characters would remain the static the whole way through; but here they're changing. They're alive!
Thank you for my good reading experience so far. Only a few more chapters to go! |
 Frog-kun 2008-12-08 . chapter 26Yay! The Sailor Scouts get their own chapter of fighting. Honestly, though, there's so much action going on! This story is well-paced, I think. Even though everything's happening at once. Heh! |
 Frog-kun 2008-12-08 . chapter 25Wow, this story is getting better and better. I think you're style has been improving as you have written this story. This chapter was long and quite dramatic. Yes, it was melodramatic in a way, but I liked it.
This story has a little bit of everything: Action, Drama, Romance, Humour and above all: Readability! |
 Frog-kun 2008-12-08 . chapter 24Oh, cliffhanger in this one! This story is really heating up nicely! |
 Frog-kun 2008-12-08 . chapter 23Great InuKag chapter. I was wondering when you'd get around to write this, since you've been so busy with MirSan with this story.
This chapter felt like an actual episode of InuYasha. Karasu is a fitting villain to me; she fits in well with the InuYasha universe and the Sailor Moon universe. Pity so many chapters had to pass before we found out her full background. But I suppose it's better thta way.
Eager to find out what happens next. |
 Frog-kun 2008-12-08 . chapter 22I see I'm finally approaching the climax of this story. The tension is rising. I'm so eager to find out what's going to happen next, I'm afraid I'm going to cut this review short. |
 Frog-kun 2008-12-08 . chapter 21The Kagome and Hotaru scene was very interesting and it certainly added a lot mroe depth to this story. Actually, I liked this chapter a lot because it has made me really feel like I know the characters well and want to root for them.
On another note, Yay smaller paragraphs! I'm finally reading this story in the format I'm used to. |
 Frog-kun 2008-12-08 . chapter 20'There was a long moment.
Sango went very red.
Miroku went very white.
“Oh,” they said.'
Priceless. XD
If you don't mind me saying, that fight between Inuyasha and Sailor Uranus reminded me of any random battle in Rurouni Kenshin. They stood there, stared at eachother, and then Uranus did this kind of really fast attack that instantly knocked Inuyasha out. If that ain't Kenshin, I don't know what is.
On to the next chappie! (By the way, I might feel better about my reviewing if you replied once in a while. Or is all my reviewing for nought?) |
 Frog-kun 2008-12-06 . chapter 19Yes, another fight scene. But... it is starting to fall into a bit of a cycle now. They fight a random enemy, the good guys talk. Then another random enemy comes and the good guys talk again. When is something really bad going to happen that will make the drama more effective? |