You write with so Mich description...love it!

Wow - perfect character analysis! It was amazing I must admit, you completely understand the characters. I didn't think it was dark at all, it was accurate and interesting to get Tobias's view on things for once.

This is pretty amazing - especially considering the quality of every other story in this archive. You captured Tobias flawlessly, in my opinion. And your grammar was a damn sight better than any other Matt Cruse fic. This is definitely a favorite of mine. Will you PLEASE write more Matt Cruse stories? We're in dire need of fics of this quality!

Hey! This is from one of your friends at school...

Great job!

I think you did a great job! I never really though about why Tobias would like the water more than the air...but the way you put it made so much sense! I loved the last line :)

It wasn't dark at all, in my opinion. You were in character; Tobias being the funny guy, nice guy type thing. I really did enjoy this! It was a good piece of what goes on in his head.

Write more, though, okay? (And I will too!)