|Reviews for Fleeting|
| hepha 10/28/11 . chapter 1
Hi. Actually I don't know what to write. I 'm a big fan of yaoi and always looking for some nice stories. Lately I started watching WINX CLUB. And I like Helia and Riven characters. So, I start looking for Riven/Helia in FFN. And now I have just finished reading your story, 'Fleeting.' And I think this title is fine. I found it! A nice story one! Your story is clenching my heart! It felt like licking a candy bar. I love Riven's outlook to his feelings. Keeping on Riven's POV is interesting. It makes readers to guess what is Helia actually thinking. For me, I don't want to know exactly what he thinks. It's just a little charming secret about Helia. It deepens his character. CUTE ever! One more thing I love about this story is the feeling and relationships between them develops in a subtle way. Riven seems to have reasons and desire. (And this is a great part right here!)
I also have a question. Did this sentence really mean 'mind'?
'Your morals are different from mind...' Or did it mean 'mine'? I'm just asking, if I got it wrong, please correct me instantly.
Please keep on writing. For me. *with puppy eyes* (Did I ask too much?)
| SunflowerIce 5/5/11 . chapter 1
I just had to smile all the time while reading it.. I like it very much and youre a good writer :)
its way more fun to read about a slash pairing than one of these main pairings
| Ansuya 5/1/11 . chapter 1
omg, it's soo cute!
i always thought they could make a great couple! sad i can't find many "fics" with them ç.ç
| Chibi Horsewoman 11/1/10 . chapter 1
I don't know why but whenever I think Winx Slash for the boys I always think Riven and Sky since they fight so much, not Riven and Helia. Although since the two are roommates I guess it could happen.
I loved Riven's bluntness and the opening into the story. Heh, Helia's more interesting than Musa... wonder what Musa would say to that.
So is the whole story a work in progress or just the title itself?