i truly hope that "the perfect temptation" continues and u keep updating regularly because i absolutly LOVE it.!

Lovely! . Wonderfully written and pefectly put to gether! NOW UPDATE!

WRITE MORE DAMN YOU!

i like this chapter. i really think that this is a cool fic, and i really like it. keep up the great work!

continue it please! its so good!

that's so sweet! i can't wait to find out how their date goes.

it seems like your popularity may have gone to your head. a lot of what was in chapter really doesn't seem to serve a huge purpose, such as Randy and Veronica going back to their bickering and what not. your chapter title was a little deceptive as I was under the impression that you would finally resolve the mess between these two characters but it was just more filler. you have a lot of devoted readers and I think it would be great if you could just pick a story, finish it, let us enjoy it, and move on to the next. being a soap addict, it was very easy to get into your family saga early on, with the way you had the various family members interact with each other. you actually had me glued when Miles and Randy's relationship fell apart, sort of signally how people can grow apart from each other, even if their's love involved, and again with Jonathan and Leigh with them never quite getting it right. but the problem is, when you initially started Veronica's story, I was intrigued, but then it just kind of fell off from their. With this story, you make it very very hard to root for Damien. I don't know what to make of Angelina. there's very little anticipation left because your stories have gotten a little predictable: keep the characters coming close, and then yank apart in some way, rinse and repeat. it's tempting to bet that just before damien can make any kind of admission, you'll have claudia interrupt him and angelina at dinner, cause a scene, and have more left unsaid until you feel the characters have been tortured enough. you should seriously consider getting a job on a soap opera. then you can actually get paid for this kind of stuff.

OOOOHH.. gettin good, an about time. eh-heh. hm, an just a suggestion that a story of Quatrina and Zach would be interesting indeed in other words.. please? if so, wait a bit, and keep writing!

This is getting GOOOOOOD. Keep it up.

bwahahahahaha! *Cackles gleefully* OH, I love where you left off, even if it is a evil cliffie. But "wow" *snickers* for some reason, I found that infinitely hilarious. :-D WRITE MORE SOON ONEGAI!

yea! how sweet how sweet! good stuff! hopefully there will be more soon! Thanks for writing! Ami

Yay! I love this! Can't wait for the next part! -Ducky

I loved this chapter, I hope that you get another chapter out soon. I hope to read the marquise fics soon!

hurry hurry hurry with the next chapter! i wanna know what he is going to say

Hey great job on another chapter...get the next one out soon. :)