Mina: T.T So sweet! I liked your story a lot! :) They are a cute couple! What do you think about Hinata and Batsu? They fight a lot but they look like a good couple... What do you think Aiko-chan?

Aiko: Sorry, but I don't play that game... I don't have a PS...

Mina: Oops, I forgot... So what do you think about Hinata and Batsu?

At first I thought, what was she/he thinking!, but then when I read it, I was like wow this so cool! This is really cool. keep it up!

Drama turned to romance! That was common... really nakakaiyak at nakakakilig!

I think this was a great story. Kyosuke and Sakura actually do make a very nice couple. Great job.

Sniffles... get me a kleenex, Xavier...

(jumps up and down) Ooh! I have something to say, I have something to say!

(points to Miyuki-Mina-chan) What she said.

And stop apologizing for your fics. There's much worse than you floating around, believe me. :)

Waahhh, that was so sad! And cute. But sad! Poor Kyosuke! Good ending tho

Nice couple, nice idea, nice plot... just ONE BIG FLAW: purple prose. You tried so badly to sound romantic that in some parts (specially the end) it was almost ridiculous. Try to control that tendence to go too sugary in your next fiction, and you'll improve a lot.

Sincerely,

Miyuki

Wow, I've been thinking that they would make a great couple too! anyway, I throught it was really nice, I really liked it.-

Gwah! Though I'm not a supporter of Sakura/Kyosuke, I LOVE THIS STORY! _ Keep it up!

Aww, how cute! Kyosuke & Sakura are my favorite characters on Rival Schools/Project Justice too! Kyosuke is so sexy in those glasses, and he's so tall and lanky, and cute! And Sakura is so tough, that she throws down with Street Fighters in her spare time! But those together, well I kinda have a different view of couples in the RS world. I have always thought that Roberto & Sakura was a majorly cute couple. The smooth, collected soccer star, falling for the hyper-excited, tomboyish Street Fighter. Too Cute. And I've always thought of a Batsu/Hinata/Kyosuke love triangle. The hot-tempered, basketball playing rebel,plus the ultra sophisticated, urbane morals commitee member,(I'm sure he's a major player!) all after the affections of the cute, enthusiastic martial artist. THAT'S my idea of things! But I really enjoyed YOU'RE view of things! Hey, if you're not busy, could you write a R/S & a B/H/K romance fic? I dig your style of writing, and I think you would do a better job of it than I would. Just a suggestion. Anyways, dig your fic, and look foward to reading more of your stories!

H4L out.

Aww, Kodak moment. Nice job, that.

that was a good story, keep on writing