great little story! thanks for sharing!

Wow, that was pretty amazing! I loved it!

Loved the imagery, discriptions, and flow your steady cadence created. The way you explained his nature, the comparison to a lion... All of it really. I enjoyed it greatly.

Lovely, poignant story. So glad they finally found each other. LOL! Even more glad he didn't put up a huge emo fight about turning her!

you are a very talented writer. i loved this though. it was beautiful

Beautiful! :)

A nice twist on the twilight story. I guess the question is if you knew that true happiness, true love was coming how long could you, would you wait? Look forward to reading more of your work.

amazing little story. thank you. really enjoyed it. i'm glad, in the end, she got to have her happiness.

Wow I loved this one shot. Your a very talented writer. Thank you

beautiful

I loved this. Finding love across time is one of my favorites.

I was just looking at your profile, as I wanted to reread the bigger they are, and i saw this. i don't normally read one shots-I don't like short stories in general-but the summary intrigued me. You painted an incredibly vivid picture in your descriptions of Bella's life. i could really relate, really feel her, understand her feelings of not fitting of being alone.

i loved this a lot. I wish there was more.

Sherry

What a beautiful tale...it leaves me wishing for my own Gabriel. I'm not sure that's something I should thank you for, though! JK - it was a beautiful change of pace and I'm marking it a favorite so I can go back and read it whenever I want!

I have thoroughly enjoyed everything of yours I've read. This is very different, but it's exceptionally good too.

That was the most beautiful thing I've read in a long time. It was perfect.