it'really pretty. well written, and IMHO in character too _.

and..the last sentence just won me over

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Aww.. this is so cute I don't know anything about Kyou (I'm ignorant) but Rika nad Kyou interact very nicely in your fic.

OOhh my gosh -dies because she's so damn impressed- that was so god!

I am very impressed with this piece, as well as your other works. Keep up the good writing!

I LOVED IT! Me again, heeh I'm a huge KareKano fan so I absolutely went ballistic (with joy) when I found out you have written KAreKano fics!

And as usual, you did not disappoint me!

You rock, dementedchris-san!

I think the rating is just right considering the fact that it does have mature contents. But that is alright! Way to go chris! Limey waff! _ hehehe… Will I expect more of that from you? Thanks for giving me a brief background on that series. Just tell me whenever you post a fic even if it isn’t RK. You are a great writer!

Cheers,

Chibi-chan

Quite cute. Not OOC, AFAIK, though I don't know enough about Kyo to tell in his case.

What I want to know is why Aya set them up the way she did. By accident, or on purpose? If Aya really were ill, a phone call to cancel would surely have sufficed. At any rate, Rika pays Aya a LOT of attention, which clearly unnerves Aya a bit. Perhaps diversion is necessary. ;)

This might be the subject of my own next story...

eh, Chris, nice job. (liking eh?) I thought your stories very well done. I like this one much, much more though, since I am a Rika fan. Keep up the good work!

no, i don't think it's OOC! it's very well done and it's the first rika/kyou fic i've seen! good job! D

Another worthy fic from dementedchris. I don't think they were OOC at all... and quite adorable.