Oh my gosh your story is awesome! I read the story about a year ago, and when I finished, I was so sad it was over...but this story is amazing!
You need to update! I need more! Hahaha you are a great writer, I want to see how this ends! Please! Update!

Update! :)

I love it. you aer good at this. cip on woert. .

I just finished reading frozen fire and was left shivering.

I like how you choose to continue this story and how you made it sound like tim bowlers writing. I bloody love the sayings from England!

Can't wait till chapter 3!

omg omg omg awesome soooooooooooooo good i love it hurry up and put up the next chapter i was awesome u dont need to edit then re-edit then re-edit the next chapter just put it up please cannot wait for the next chapter this is gonna be a good story :D good luck writing

Overall, your story plot is great. The only thing is, Dusty doesn't seem like she was in Frozen Fire. I know you've mentioned that she's changed alot, but I still think she should still have a little bit of her repulsive attitude like she had in Frozen Fire. Cant wait until the third chapter. :)

:D I really really liked that, and I can't wait to see how this story will end! Anyway, I really liked the way you introduced the reader into the world of your story's, right from the start. Great job!