With or without closing my eyes, I think your "twist" of "waking" Percy up from his catatonia is very good -both in a stylistic and "plot" way. Excuse me if I can't make myself very clear, but I'm struggling with my poor command of English "

I'd like to thank you for sharing that fic with us -

That was great. I really like your writing style. It reads really easily.

This is truly amazing...

Woooooooow. That was amazing. It truly was. I always love your style of writing, it's very well written and I love getting lost in it. I love how you keep it close to the book, the personalities, referring back to things, quotes, etc. I love the Green Mile so much. I was just thinking about it last night, considering re-reading it. This would be read number six, and it blows my mind every time. I bow down to Stephen King, ah he's amazing. This is sooo good though I really love it.

'That boys cheese done slipped off his cracker' XD Hee. I love that line. When Paul first walked in and saw Percy catatonic, I hear that line in my mind lol. Great job!