|Reviews for Emily's Diary|
| auntieleena 2/18/12 . chapter 1
That was really cool.
| Tabbi-Katt 1/28/11 . chapter 1
I hope you got a good grade on that English project because this is good! I think you got Emily's feelings down very well- quite an accomplishment for a character that doesn't get a lot of screen time- but didn't layer on the drama too much. The diary entries sounded believable and true, especially the little mentions, like a foggy day making her cry.
The only criticsm I have are a few typos (under Oct. 29, there's a missing apostrophe in "cant"; "loose" instead of "lose") but they're tiny enough they didn't whip me out of the story.
My favorite line: "The little boy I used to know; not the sad man I will be leaving behind."
Very, very good job.
| mrs. obsession 11/14/10 . chapter 1
OMG this was very good! i liked it alot! but i was looking for something more in depth when u tagged it as romance! i can't believe what that old hobo did to her mcdonalds! HE IS THE REASON FOR HER DEATH kinda! its y i think she can't think of chris as her bf instead of as her bro! UGH oh well!