u actually thought u did bad?OMG! icried so much! i thought i was gonna drown and die! dang!

u actually thought u did bad?OMG! icried so much! i thought i was gonna drown and die! dang!

I loved reading all of it. One of the other reviews mentioned you captured the emotions well. I agree. Beautiful work here. It reminds me of Bella's dream she had on her birthday fearing aging while Edward stay the same.

That was the sweetest and the saddest thing I have ever read.

I really love the way you write keep it up, are you going to continue this story? Amazing Job!

I loved it. Of course now my dog is staring at me, while I cry over your story. But it was worth it.

Don't sell yourself short. It was a beautiful oneshot.

I am not normally one for sad endings but i really liked this little piece. I had tears in my eyes at the end, (which is of course why I usually stick to happy ever after endings, I am far too emotional).

Very well written.

Aea

x

Actually it was really good, just really depressing, there are a lot of things I would change about Stephanie Meyer's books but Bella being changed isn't one of them. This moment that you wrote about so well is agonizing to actually read about, and you did an awesome job of portraying the emotions here!