ooooooh i really like this xx

Critique:Grammer.

Rewarding Comment:Love it though.

i love this chappter

it was so awesome

i reqally like this story, great job!

the story is GREAT!please continue ASAP! :D

U need to work on grammar.

However, i'm soooo glad SOMEONE at LAST posted another Awakened xD

Good start,

Keep going,

But yeah, i really think u shud proof read ure stories b4 u post them :/

Good job.

Xoxoxoxoxo

ICABTW

aka Spiritgal1

huh this is actually a pretty good story so and im just wondering if ur one of those people who update often or hardly ever b/c i am sadly addicted to fanfiction and i hate it when people never update...especially if the story sounds really good.

anyways great story...hope u update soon :)