That. Was. Amazing. I literally recoiled in shock at the ending! So sad! Loved it. Good job.

Oh lord... The last line... I'm sobbing.

So sad! :( Loved it

Awww, such a sad ending, just when I was looking forward to a fangirl squee! lol

I hate you for that ending. I loved it so much, and then POOF it's a dream -_-

Thats really not funny...its actually down right depressing thanks to those last lines you know.

Aw...

ah major sad ending there. it just so happened that the sad music i was listening to ended with my reading your story at the same time. beyond major sad. anyway love the sadness. not kinky or overly rated. just the right amount, let you know what is going on. good stuff you got here.

...At first I was thinking, "Ah this is so sweet!" Now I sort of want to cry. Poor Doctor. I can't help but wonder what happened to Rose and Jack though. Excellent story, really pulled at my heart strings.