|Reviews for Don's Family Moments|
| newbie 1/5/13 . chapter 4
I'm not much of a newbie anymore but I like the name...
your story was simply grand and it kept me guessing on what was wrong with her.I think the idea of twins is adorable,I loved it.I hope you keep writing these stories because I think you have a wonderful talent for writing... sorry if the review sounds writer, I'm exhausted
| zestychicken2 8/20/11 . chapter 2
I really actually am enjoying this story... I'm a little confused - just because... Lol, so are they all turtles? Or is Eve a human? You said Yoshi was, and it wouldn't make sense if Don wasn't? Just curious :D
It kinda sucks that TMNT isn't a popular thing to write for, because I think you should be getting more reviews on this story... It's very interesting :)
I'm sad that there's a cliff hanger, but hopefully my review will make a difference and have you update lol. Their kids sound adorable, and I like that you throw in the other turtles as well! I'm kind of really wondering what's wrong with Eve! I'm really interested haha
Your writing is good too... I don't see any grammar or spelling mistakes - and if there are, they aren't noticeable enough to take away from the story. So, I'm impressed!
Please update soon, or at least reply back and let me know if you ever WILL update again lol :) Keep up the fine work, you're a pretty good writer!
| pyrusdracula09 2/25/11 . chapter 1