I love it when Leo talks tough. _ This is a nice entrance for a story, and I love Leo's lines in here, especially this one"I may be the leader they follow in battle, the big brother they turn to in life, but I am not their strength." _

I love it. _

Great story. It was beautifully written.

Wow! This was interesting! I love it!

I originally read this during the fanfic challenge. Even better the second time through! Excellent work, Kali!