more... more...

LUV IT!

You have to keep going! There is no way you can end it there. Please keep going;)

wow, you did fix some mistakes! Good job, redrum! Keep it up!

You really SHOULD continue! I need to knoooow what happens!I'm that kind of person..Just please continue!

hm, Squall could get caught sneeking his litt;e knife thing from Zell's pocket or something, then Zell would talk him out of the habit. Then, Squall'd be all tender and vaunerable, then they'd make-out!...how's that? I dunno...great chap! I hope you get the yaoi scene up soon!

I think it's just fine, pretty much nequal to the other chap(s). Zely'd better keep Squall smiling, he needs it! . I smiling! _ what's wrong with her face! she needs a plastic surgeon, quick!

oooh, so sweet! Zell cares, so nice! *happiness* yay! Squally will be happy with some one!

Good story idea thing..Very good. Lovin' it! keep it up, and I'll keep reading!

Please continue this story. The way it ended is just too sad! I'm awaiting more from you. you are a very good writer.

Jennilee

Sequel! I'm demanding a sequel! _ Pleeeease! Write more!

Whoo! I'm glad I got a chance to read! .!

Poor Squally.;!
This is great! -Reads more- n_n!

You totally gotta continue this! I love it! It was so cute...and really really really good!

ooooooo...poor zell .. and poor messed up squally ;.
carry on with this, its definitely good enough!

Sad... but cute as well. It's the kind of story that makes you think, and it's really well written. I can tell you spent a lot of time on it. You should write more fanfics! D