|Reviews for Once Upon Never|
| 9thAvenueNorth 11/13/10 . chapter 4
First of all... I'd like to go wiggly over the fact that you update so fast. It brings great joy to my miserable, miserable existence.
Secondly, pfffffff, this chapter was awesome... and there wasn't even any smut. You must be a ridiculously talented writer to achieve this much. And HOW'D YOU MANAGE TO MAKE ME WANT TO CRY IN, LIKE, ONE SENTENCE? You're messing with my head, here.
Thankyou for the ClaudeSmile, also. I no longer feel the urge to perform violent acts towards your person. He's turning out to be the loveliest pedo I've ever read/beaten off with a stick.
Now Craving Burritos,
| Veleda 11/12/10 . chapter 4
Oh, I really like this. I think it's hard to make modern AUs work in this fandom, but this is excellent. I'm really looking forward to seeing more of this.
| Burning In The Dark 11/12/10 . chapter 4
I like it :) keep going? :D *addicted* I must know what happens :D
| AffableKiwi 11/12/10 . chapter 4
God damn... I was not expecting such a short ending paragraph to bring tears to my eyes.
Have I mentioned how much I love this story? I love it, I really do. It's so refreshing and nice to see a fanfic where Claude isn't just using or manipulating Alois, at least from the looks of it so far. I can't believe I'm going to associate such a notion with Claude, but it was sweet of him at the end to remain on the line while Alois wept instead of just hanging up.
And Alois, oh man, the poor kid. Even in AU he gets screwed over. Dx I'm already hoping for a happy ending with this kid, but who knows, you're the author. Whatever you do, I'm sure it'll be fabulous.
This fic is quickly becoming one of my favorites. Alois's dialogue is quite addicting and funny, a great contrast with Claude's blunt and ever so serious dialogue. I cannot wait for a next chapter! :)
| Darra-ka 11/11/10 . chapter 4
Myaaaahh! Poor Alois!
But I'm really interested in this story - what's gonna happen what's gonna happennn
And again, thanks for the speedy update! :)
| Radishdude773 11/11/10 . chapter 4
Wow. This is amamzing!
most of the alois/claude fics I've read are really depressing, and mainly one sided, with Alois in love with Claude, and Claude manipulating him.
But this is really interesting- I like the way you still make Alois kinda psycho and unstable, but also very approachable.
I'm really glad that there's something like this out there, because I like alois/claude SO much, and they deserve more fanfiction.
Please write more soon!
| Kaletin 11/11/10 . chapter 4
...You know how to write Alois, and you know how to write Claude. Dayum.
The ending of that was just so heart wrenching. God, poor Alois.
Man. Great chapter. I can't wait to see where this heads, next. :
| Kaletin 11/11/10 . chapter 3
Oh my God, I'm so glad I read this (AffableKiwi recommended it to me).
Your writing just kills me! It's so... casual? I love the style. It flows so well, and it's such a pleasure to read.
The little narration about Alois's thoughts about Claude probably murdering him and getting caught? Oh my! XD I cracked up! It was hilarious!
You've got their characters down so well, too!
Really, your writing is a thrill to read. :] It's great to see such a well written fic (and even well written smut). I look forward to any update!
| Kaslo 11/11/10 . chapter 4
Yay new update! I really love present day au kuroshitsuji fics, and the fact that this one isn't a depressing one (because most Claude/Alois fics are all depressing) is very awesomes. Keep writing!
| ColdHeartedVixen 11/11/10 . chapter 4
I'm really loving this. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Minako 11/11/10 . chapter 3
UPDATE SOON PLEASE! Dx! I love your story, Alois is so Alois and Claude is too Claude xDDDD
Luv ya 3
| AffableKiwi 11/11/10 . chapter 3
I could have sworn I reviewed this! Apparently not.
I didn't think I would enjoy an AloisxClaude fic as much as I did with this one. I love your characterization of Alois in this AU setting. The reader really gets that sense of hopelessness yet strength from him - he doesn't crumple and fall to his misery, but continues on with a lack of interest for his own well being. Very much like how I'd imagine him to act before Claude came along. ;)
I enjoy the realistic and humorous narrative of the story. I like how this isn't some romanticized fic. Example - when Alois and Claude were having sex in the car, and Alois thumped the horn by accident, setting it off. It just made the moment all the more imaginable, better, even relatable, in a sense. :) I love it.
Your writing is very addicting and I find myself quite entranced by it. I shall be looking forward to more! You're such a great author.
| Eevee Tofu 11/11/10 . chapter 1
Your writing style is gorgeous. I want to have its babies.
| Kaslo 11/11/10 . chapter 3
I really like your writing style, and both Alois and Claude were pretty IC. But Claude should lighten up and smile.. O.o
| XXilikecatsXX 11/10/10 . chapter 3
holy shiz... i think i love you