AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

This is great! All those puns!

Oh god, I love ninja! D

Oh, my.

I would do such evil, perverted, horrible things to that man. ESPECALLY if he was candy-coated. WANT.

Also PUNS MADE OF WIN. Which adds 10 points of awesome to the story.

I love you for this. Awesome.

Fabulous, as usual! Don't have any good critique or anything, but I enjoyed it.

Ah, killing plot bunnies, an enjoyble sport that many can enjoy the fruit of. Laughed, thought it a nice little karmic nod to not make fun of your sword brother when he's covered in honey. And the only reason that Tommy would probably have gotten less teasing with Cobra was because they would have stopped after he cut off the first one's head. Can't get away with that in the Joes. Until next time.

beach head had the same problem so he sould feel a bit sorry for storm shaddow though.

please keep writing )

Oh Lord, all of the bad punning was great. I was half expecting Snake Eyes or Jinx to show up and laugh their asses off, but having the other Joes mock him was fun too.

This is too cute! Poor Storm though, he should have realized all that teasing was going to come back on him!

Very happy. :)

Liked the setup, just enough details to set the scene and the situation without getting drawn out at all. Loved how it happened - he smelled it, he knew it, and he had to dive right in anyway.

Adored all the puns. Good job and many thanks!

Very nice. Though I'm not sure that someone would ship honeycomb slabs. They are usually not fit for something like that as the wax seals on the chambers break easily.

But the story is really cute and the punning at the end is great. Nice touch to have Storm retort in kind at the end.

Oh . . . my . . . god. So many puns. So much humor at Storm Shadow's expense. I laughed so hard I scared my poor cat.

That's one dead plot bunny, all right, but it died a wonderful death. :D

hahahahhahahah! so how is storm gonna top the falling out of plane without a good working parachute?