It's amazing.
Short and emotionally charged, you did a great job.

There's a poignant truth to this; very well done.

I love where you're going with this, but you really need to make a lot of grammatical corrections.

I thought this story was amazing, it was detailed very well and it reminded me of when I watched this movie how his reaction would be and how he would have to deal with what happened. I especially liked the ending sentence, I thought it made a lot of sense with how he was feeling.

Short but sweet :) I like it.

I liked the story, short, but passionate. But.. didn't he lose his left arm?

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