ah... I'm a huge fan of pokesilvershipping, how is that I didn't found this story long time ago? Oh well... the start is great... I hope you will update this story in the future or will make another one for Satoshi and Kotone! They were so kawaii, but sadly she has to go away, too bad!

i love it! cant wait for more! even though im not a huge fan of PokeSilvershipping and Cavaliershipping, more of a Pearshipping fan but at least there wil be one-sided pearlshipping in this story at least. anyway, cant wait for more!

Congratulations on a first published story, first of all, Nicole. :D I can tell you for a fact I'll be keeping a good eye on it.

Soo, the plot and setting for this chapter, and the story as a whole I'm sure I'll come to think, is brilliant. DP 191, the end of a truly great Pokemon era now being altered in this story to fit a pattern I personally love a lot, despite me liking Best Wishes a lot as well.

But Dawn staying, just one of the many points, is the peak of awesome; I'm very happy you made that kind of decision. Scene inclusions and quotes from the episode itself are also very well chosen (The wake up/stairs/living room scenes).

I can't sadly think of a longer review to write, but Nicole, know that this is a great start, especially for a first story, to what will be a great story as a whole. Keep it up. :)

Daijobu!

Awesome story!

My favorite Pokemon shipping is Pearlshipping but if I couldn't pair Ash and Dawn with each other my next choices for them would definietly be Gary and Lyra.

I definietly will continue to read this story. Great Job & Keep it up! 8DD

cool Nicole I really starting to like this and Pokesilver one of my It's Brett too.I would love to see more of this story.

Wow, great start to this story, Nicole. Your writing skills seem to be top notch.

I just love how you based this chapter heavily off of DP191, although reading this makes me sad now cause I miss DP & Dawn so much now. But I really like BW now and I think it's very interesting. I still miss DP though D:

Ok, I'll drop that subject now!

Either way, this story seems like it'll be a great hit. Correction, I know it will be and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Great job & keep it up! 8D

Awesome chapter, Nicole! Your writing skills are amazing :O :D

I absolutely love how you based this chapter on DP 191, although, I did feel like crying a bit. Seeing as how much I miss DP :(

But enough of that! I think this will be a great story :DD I just know it.

Keep it up, sis! 8D

Awesome Story, Nicole! I seriously loved it.

I'll definitely will be continuing to read this story. Great Job and keep it up! 8D