Although it would've been better if you had put their dialogue in spaces, I liked this. And it's strange...I usually don't read Rating M...

This was so amazingly epic!

Alfred X Arthur is one of my favorite hetaila pairings, and as a fan i have to say this was really good. 3'd it

You know this is actually pretty cute! 3

The only problem I had is you seemed to hit fast forward for that last paragraph like the only reason you added it was to make this M. ' I was like "WHOAH WHOAH SLOW DOWN WHAT?" XD

Lol But other than that, I liked it.

Poor Alfred

It was a somewhat enjoyable story. I only say somewhat enjoyable because it was put into huge paragraphs. Usually, a paragraph ends after someone stops talking and someone else starts.

Otherwise, it's good!

I enjoyed reading it! I felt so sorry for him I hate it whne someone wakes me up so fast ;A;

The only problem with this is that its hard to read. You have to start a new paragraph everytime someone talks:

"Alfred! Get up Arthur yelled, "You're goin to be late!" Arthur grabbed...

"leave me alone!" Alfred whined

etc