|Reviews for Unethical Behavior|
| cold kagome 11/27/10 . chapter 7
OMG... HAHAH I LOVE IT
| liddlepierat 11/27/10 . chapter 7
"Taken out by Ninja Nanna!," *roars with laughter*
This story is an awesome mix between drama and comedy! Good job!
| CeCe Away 11/21/10 . chapter 6
This one was a little different than the others, showcasing the weariness Dean must be feeling as well as trying to reason out what's going on. The Sherriff's viewpoint of Sam came across so heartfelt and sad. I could feel the pity and sadness coming off of her.
This chapter just made it all seem so poignant.
| OutTonightAndForever 11/18/10 . chapter 6
great chapter! sam needs his soul back! so sad that he has no morals anymore!
| OutTonightAndForever 11/18/10 . chapter 4
this series is great! clowns are scary so i completely get why sam is afraid of them ] it almost felt like this was normal sam, but we know it isn't! anyways awesome job!
| Twinchester Angel 11/18/10 . chapter 6
Ok, this one was a lot sadder than the last ones and it broke my heart quite a bit but it was still excellent! I am in absolute awe at your character capturing abilities. That whole scene with the sheriff and then after that with the fight between the boys and Bobby...just excellent. I had never even thought of the demon blood. Where the hell does your mind come up with this stuff? I feel I should almost bow down to you. LOL I'm starting to think you don't have the boys with you but that you are actually one of them using a fake name. Seriously! Or, are you Jeremy Carver? He's gone and now I think I know where he is. :D I loved this even though it was kind of sad. I just feel sorry for Sam wondering around alone and he feels alone but it doesn't hurt him but geez. Poor guy. Kudos also on your Bobby writing. He seems to be a person that people can't quite pin down. I've read some where people get him very well but usually that's not the case. You have him down to a T. I did like the glimmer of hope at the end though with Dean reassuring Sam that he wouldn't give up on him. And my favorite of course is Dean taking one of his Sammy's old quotes and using it in his case study. People don't just disappear Dean. Other people just stop looking for them. Awwwww Sammy. And it works in this case for Sammy's soul. It hasn't disappeared. It just needs to be found. Wow. So you've officially turned me into sappy fangirl for the night. I hope u don't mind but I linked a few people that I'm friends with on Twitter to this story. It's getting excellent reviews! I don't know if they have accounts so I don't know if they can review but they have read it. I've only recommended 4 or 5 stories to people because I just have to pass on quality work. If that makes you uncomfortable or something, please tell me and I'll stop. Its just that this is so damn good! Ok. Time to roll the credits on this chick flick! Thanks for this chapter and I soooo cannot wait for more! Thanks! *big soulful Sammy sized hugs* :)
| cold kagome 11/17/10 . chapter 6
AWWWE,... POOR DEAN AND SAM.. THEY NEVER STOP YELLING POUTED LOVE IT
| Mew-a-bell 11/14/10 . chapter 5
lol another great chapter xD
Yay Dean & Gwen are getting along x3
| Mew-a-bell 11/14/10 . chapter 4
LOL Poor Sammy xD I love how he fights ghosts and demons and things every day, yet he's only scared of clowns :'D
& I hope they bring Chuck back in the show o3o He was cool x3
| cold kagome 11/13/10 . chapter 5
OMG... .LOVE IT... . . . . ... ...MAINLY WHEN SAMMY FALL TO SLEEP.. LOL LOVE IT.
| CeCe Away 11/13/10 . chapter 5
I was already liking Gwen, but now I like her even more with the way you wrote her.
So, hormonal response. That's interesting, sounds plausible, why not? It makes sense with how Sam reacted to the clowns.
And I guess Sam should have tried getting drunk if he wanted to go to sleep all this time. If I were Dean, I'd get Sam drunk alot so I wouldn't have to sleep with someone moving around the hotel all night.
Another good one, Tips. As always.
| Twinchester Angel 11/13/10 . chapter 5
First of all, I hafta say, "Cats and dogs living together. Mass hysteria!" I laughed so hard when Sam said that tonight! My kids did too. I say that ALL the time! I yelled at the TV, That's my line! But then I decided since Sam looked so beautiful tonight in his suit, or when he was running, or when he took his new gun, which is also hot by the way, and put it in the back of his pants, and...I'm sorry. What was I talking about? *goes back to beginning and reads* Oh yeah! Sorry. I decided I'd let Sam use my Ghostbuster line. LOL So anyway. Another brilliant chapter! I don't know how you did it but you made me like Gwen! I mean, I'm not one of the people that hates the Campbells. Irritated with them, yes. Totally creeped out by grandpa until last week? Definitely. But I didn't hate them. I'm glad they're not in our face every week though. I'm not in love with them by any stretch of the imagination but I don't hate them. I did, however, think Gwen was slow minded, maybe even a little developmentally disabled because she always had a big smile on her face and a little bit of an 'off' look in her eyes but you've changed my way of thinking about her. I got a little sad when they were talking about trust. :( As funny as soulless Sam is, my heart aches for the old Sam. Another exceptional chapter. I loved it. Oh and the part in the car in the beginning? Sam deciphering Dean's expression and then telling Gwen what Dean wants him to and what Dean doesn't want him to? I was laughing so hard! I totally didn't see that coming! It made me go Aawwwwww tho cuz even soulless, Sammy knows how to read Dean. Last thing, I had to giggle at your note at the beginning how Sam doesn't care and he just wanders off. LOLOLOL! I can totally see him doing that! Ha Ha! And Dean running after him, 'Dammit Sam! Get your un-emo ass back here!' I hafta applaud your ability for getting Soulless Sam. He's hard to grasp but you've done a great job! Love this so much! Thank you thank you! I'm gonna quit rambling so you can write more! Hee hee! *big huge sasquatch sized hugs*
| Twinchester Angel 11/13/10 . chapter 4
OMG you're a speed poster! I still have another chapter to read! Yay! This was friggin hilarious! Dare me not to laugh! Right. I'd hafta be soulless not to laugh! A clown convention! Dean must be feeding you some really yummy grapes cuz I have a feeling this chapter was all for him! I loved how he said,'soulless boy got needs?' LOL After this chapter I'm even more convinced you have those boys with you! You tell the poor soulless boy he can bring those needs my way. Just sayin... *giggle* Again, this chapter was incredible! You should submit this to Ben Edlund, seriously. Nice touch with the group photo too! Ha ha! Poor Sammy fainting! I'm loving this story and it just keeps getting better, if that's possible. I know I'm gushing but I'm just amazed how in character this is and how good your plots are. I can picture every word happening in my head. Even Randy Moore. (Don't worry Dean, I thought your porn name line was funny. I snickered) Thanks again for your hard work and for posting another quality chapter. *hugs* Now, I'll send you a private message with directions and I'll take Sam off your hands for awhile...:D
| T.L. Arens 11/12/10 . chapter 5
This was the best chapter yet! I TOTALLY cracked up at the end-LOVED Gwen! Awesome! They need to borrow her character from you cuz I LOVE how you portrayed her! :D
I also TOTALLY love how she explained Sam's phobia-makes BEAUTIFUL sense! :D Awesome chapter! I love what you're doing here and where this story is heading! -
More Gwen, please!
| Yukimura Hina 11/12/10 . chapter 2
Oh goodness, this is brilliant! your character voices are PERFECT and poor little Marci!
Thanks for writing.