This is a very sad story! Poor Geppetto

awwww... *sniff* that was sad, at least he now has Pinnochio, whose name I can't spell most of the time. I actually read this before I knew what "stillborn" ment, so I thought it ment "Still born" so I was like, "So why is he sad?" Then I finally got it...ignorance is bliss.

Great story, glad you liked mine, and YES! I DID see part 2 Deathly Hallows! 2nd favorite movie EVER! (PoA being my first)

This is a beautiful (heartbreaking) way to Geppetto's young years. Easy and greatful to read.

Hi! Its me. There has been some problem with login so...you know...it sucks. The story was good, but sad. Keep

Up with the writing!

i cant stop reading this:) so, so cute. i love it!

Beautifully written! So tragic what happened to Geppetto's wife but I'm glad he finally received the son he had been longing for. Bravo! :-)

beautiful but sad story. atleast now he has a son.

OMG, that is so sad!