I've stumbled across this story and like it very much. Normally I don't like reading shounai but then again, you shocked me with that revelation). I'll continue reading this story (it's really god!) and I've been enjoying it. Poor Shin, I feel sorry for him that was a dirty trick that Dais pulled but I can so see him doing something like that. Is Ryo going to appear later in this story, just out of curiousity. If you need help with your story click on either Dixxy Mouri or Ghost of the Dawn's profile and click on a link that says Samurai Fanservice (on it's a really cool forum they have going and the people there are really friendly.
Let me know if you are going to continue this story (please email me to let me know, I like the story that much).
Keep up the good work and I can not wait for the next update and I hope that Shin beats Dias!
Just here to say... Where art thou? *Sniff, sniff* I hope you haven't abandoned us again. Well, in any case, just here to say that yeah, I'm still waiting and hoping for a continuation. I'm so pathetic...like a dog waiting for its master. *Woof, woof*
Khisanth 12/24/03 . chapter 11
Waahh... so long between chapters. ;_; and OMFG! Shin... dueling Rajura? AAH! scary-scary.:dives underneath a bed and hides with a Shuu doll o.o;
I must admit for awhile I was bored but you caught my attention once again. Keep it up. It is going great.
Rao Of Fire and Ice
With a palm that opened softly
I hold dreams tightly
Someday we shall become the wind
Taking dreams to the distant future
sumsum 10/9/03 . chapter 11
wow. Okay, I got to read this after you fixed the problem (and I know how it is, my new comp came with that same program and it bites the big one), so I don't have to complain. _ And truthfully, there's nothing I could complain about.
I loved it. The kitchen scene was superb, the Seiji losing his cool was funny, but what made it even more funny was it took Rajura so completely off guard. And Anubisu. Such a cutey, even if he isn't my fave. Love that you got him and Rajura shacking up, though. And that Seiji put it together with minimal effort.
And Shu and Touma... how cute! Uhm, yeah. Okay. I'll leave ya to it. I'd ask for you to hurry up, but I'm sure you're doing your best. _
*Laughs* Oh dear Lord, poor Shin! But that last part was just too hilarious! I am also seeing more of the faint traces of shounen-ai..yay! All in all, this was a good chapter. Musing from Shin, a tantrum from Seiji, and Rajura being his arrogant self...yup. No complaints here! The formatting was a little off but then you explained it so no problems there. Word Perfect...never used that before...
I'm just so glad you updated! (I just had to get that out of my system
Okay...hope to read more soon, k?
Have to hand it to Rajura, he has guts (not exactly the words I would use, but I'm being polite). I kinda hope that Shin does knock his block off, the man deserves it. And Seiji should have thought about how he was going to get the old goat back to his sister in the first place. Now he's stuck letting his student do his dirty work for him, and I don't think that Seiji is one to allow another to do that. I think the only one out of the deal who isn't as involved is Anubisu and Touma. Although it would be more periferal.
wow...I still can't believe there's a new chapter here! As long as you update eventually, I don't care how long it takes you. _ Just don't discontinue it, or disappear for some unknown reason. I've noticed that happening to a lot of my fav authors, like Hiruma... where'd she go? Anyway, loved the portrayal of Seiji in this chapter. He sure is funny when he gets mad. And I love Touma's big mouth. _ I'm sure he'll be feeling some pain in the morning. Nice to see Shu not being the incredibly brash one too.
AngelVixen 10/4/03 . chapter 11
If you bring him back, you can have him. In one piece!
HOORAY FOR NEW CHAPTERS! ...I can't wait until Rina gets a hold of you...*grins evilly*
maryd 10/4/03 . chapter 11
*screams and faints* Oh my gosh, she updated! Do you know how long...well, never mind. I love the opening sentences and this chapter is full of your usual plot twists and crammed with revelations, which we all like, and the descriptions of Touma, Shin, and Shu working with the food in the first part made me hungry. However, the first part needs to be broken down into paragraphs, or else it lends a rushed feel to the chapter. Man, that Rajura, with all the leverage over Seiji,... now why would he demand to duel w/ Shin and not Seiji...hm...Update soon, please? like in two months, like you said (looks hopeful)?
Very nice chapter, to tell you the truth I forgot about this chapter till today and decided to tell you that I like your fic and to please update soon.
Kar-chan 6/8/03 . chapter 10
-_- It's not late(only 9:20 pm) but I am damn tierd right now. Read the chapter...sometime ago, but it was about 4:00 a.m. and my pincil holder started shrinking. so I wasn't in the right state of mind. Hell, I'm not in the right state of mind right now(but better then before.) So you decided to update. Actualy, it never crossed my mind that the story was discontiued. Probebly because I've went on hiatus for more than a year before, so don't feel bad. Poor Seji. His secret got out. I thought the man was his lover. I'm so smart! _-_- excitment !