what the hell. this kid has my fuckin name damnit! that was crepey dude he has my name!

This is one of the best fics I think I've ever read, for any fandom. You really captured their characters, and everything was wonderfully written. Loved it! Can't praise it enough! Thanks for writing :)

So sweet and sexy!

wow this is sooo damn cute! love the pairing!

I loved your story! I really did! Thanks for writting it! Please read mine (once I get to finish it) hahahaha. I enjoyed reading it, thanks a lot!

There are not enough words in my vocabulary to express how much I love this...

So, simple, I love it.

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First I want to start off by saying that I love you lol, this story was honestly one of the best I have ever read period. And I have read a lot of fanfictions. I love the way you characterized both Gohan and Piccolo, I really loved Piccolo though. Also, you should write more Piccolo/Gohan stories. There are so few of them and this one is just so... I can't even describe it. I just love it. So you should write more. I cannot believe I have not read this story before and I want to thank you for posting this and allowing me to read this wonderful piece of art.

Cadie(Zangetsu)

This is one of the best stories I have EVER read. The world needs more Piccohan, I implore you, please write more!

:Claps Excitedly:

So good. I really enjoyed reading this. Very steamy

I loved how you kept Piccolo so in-character. The bit of drama in the beginning was very icy, but it quickly heated up with that bedroom scene *fans self* that was amazing(no pun intended)

And stubborn Piccolo (tsk tsk) of course he wasn't going to admit his love, but after all that happened it's impossible for him to deny anything, not that he would. I know he loves Gohan

Anywho, the only things I can point out was that you were a little repetitive. I saw the same words repeated over and over again, but it wasn't so bothersome since the plot was so great.

I give it a 10/10. Great job, please write more!

It was so good I want to cry! I was skirting around this fic because one of the genres it was listed under was angst (definitely not my kind of thing) but seeing as I am running out of Piccolo/Gohan fics (Love them together!) I decided to go ahead and read this...SO glad I did! my favorite dbz fic ever! and I thought everyone was as in-character as they were gonna get;p so yeah, awesome job and a big thank you to you for writing and posting this (it was very hot too).

I really liked it, I wish there were more stories like this. I just wish it were longer.

I really appreciate great writing :) bravo.

Simultaneously intense, funny and sexy- quite a feat to pull off. Freaking loved it.

Thank you, thank you, thank you! This story was simply amazing! I loved the way you kept both characters in character without losing the heat and passion. Gah! The sex was fantabulous, thought my laptop would short circuit from the heat. Sighs, if only there were more lengthy stories out there with this pairing that is this well written. Unfortunately, yours seems to be one of the few well written stories for this pairing that is complete.

Angelwarrior1

OMFG! THAT WAS PERFECT! Wow, that was beautiful! i have recently gained a picoloxgohan fetish n u nailed it! im grinning lyk a perv now! lol wow, that is a super favourite! I LOVE YOU FOR THIS FIC! -Gets a nosebleed- hehehehe