A sweet story, you have expressed different characters well, and i like the idea that Neville will be headmaster someday.

What a good little one-shot. I can just imagine Severus reacting that way when Neville was appointed Headmaster. Although I struggled to get my head around Neville being almost sixty! So difficult to imagine him and Harry, etc, being so old haha. Like in the other story I just read, you do a really good job of setting it up to get a picture in the readers mind of what's going on.

I really like the idea of Neville becoming headmaster one day and I think you wrote the reactions from everyone very well. Nice job!

I love the idea of Neville as the headmaster. I'm going to make him the new headmaster in my second story of my Lily series.

Nice little one shot. I like the idea of Neville eventually becoming Headmaster.

As I noted with someone else, I like the stories where the author has the depth & subtlety to write about the people & their psyches, that underlie the characters.

Nice job with this!