you have a talent to make me cry

Such a sad, heartbreaking story... So well written that I could really feel Ames' mounting grief and Guerrero's fading out.

Dammit that made me want to cry! That's soo sad... Sooo terribly super sad... But it's brilliant... Awww Im all teary eyed almost!

Jeez, this was so sad... gripping, but sad... guess that's what you were aiming at... well done... did I mention it's terribly sad?

This one is so cool. So much story, much more than the actual text. You use so few sentences to paint a whole backstory, just these very few words and still the reader has a very good idea what happened. It's incredibly sad, but also touching, moving... I wish you would turn this into something longer.

I really enjoy your little stories...they are great and super fun to read.

You've captured the characters really well!

Funny...love it!

"I think the feeling is mutual" - this made me laugh. Poor Guerrero, but very enjoyable fic! I love it when the two take care of each other.

"he can feel the skin around it gaping every time he moves" Good grief. Made me cringe! I don't particularly enjoy cringing, but to me it's a sign someone has written a well-worded phrase. Nicely done.

Scarlet G

this was just too good. Loved it!

Scarlet G

Interesting. Not yet sure what to make out of it, but interesting.

I must admit, I laughed at the end of this.

I like this. I could see Guerrero having a past that involved drugs in some way, and I've always kind of wondered how he ended up where he is. He looks like someone who has had a really rough life at some point in the past.

I like this chapter. I've wondered before if Guererro was a drug user, seems to fit the profile. Interesting idea and well executed. It would make for a good full-length story for sure.

well that last one was depressing. I like Ames.