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Really one of THE BEST stories I've read yet on FF. EXCELLENT job !

Hey! I am an ugly chick with a unibrow and I find this offensive! Just kidding! Well, I am an ugly chick with a unibrow, but anyway...
I really love this story. Like, it's in my top five favourites. Hell, maybe my top 3. I really appreciate your spelling, grammar and punctuation as well as your amazing writing skills because, lets face it, a lot of writers are teenage girl who cannot seem to understand that the letter "I" is capitalised and that most normal people don't use abbreviations like "FYI" and "IMHO" constantly in their thoughts. And being a teenage girl is not even an excuse for this, because I am a teenage girl, and to me, a piece of writing can be awe inspiring, but if it is ALL spelt wrong (Not just some, because people make mistakes) and it has terrible grammar, well, it isn't worth a tenth of what it would be if it did.
But anyway, thank you for giving me the pleasure of reading this wonderful story.

one hell of a great fic i throughly enjoyed it.

awsopme,amazing,teriffic what more can i say

thanks for sharing your amazing talent

fianlly finished this story and so glad that you finished it. i cant wait to read some of your other stuff

This is such a sweet and charming chapter. You balanced it perfectly to keep it happy, light and fun, while still making Bella and Edward's love for each other quite clear. Even though you are probably younger than most of the good Twilight fan fiction writers, you very talentedly put your thoughts and insight into inspiring writing. Thank you for sharing your story with us.

I suspended disbelief with part of this chapter, as in reality, Bella wouldn't have been able to meet Edward at the gate. She has to have a plane ticket to even get through security. I've always loved the concept of suspension of disbelief, especially with FF. it makes me insane when people get truly angry about something that isn't "realistic." If they want realistic and true, well, that's what non-fiction is for. Continue on, you're doing a great job. Your keen insight and storytelling amaze me, especially at your age.

As somebody who took waaaaaaay too many psychology classes, they are wrong to push her. Plus, many people can (and do) grieve, remember and such away from a grave marker. There really is no wrong way to do something that personal. If she needs it for closure, then she absolutely should go. IMHO. I will now move on to see what she needs, but I am fairly sure I can guess.

I may be delusional - entirely possible. However, before Edward came to visit, didn't he tell her how his "leave" worked? Because you wrote it earlier, I think, I was actually counting on him being able to visit before June! Just send me an electronic smack if I'm wrong or even if I'm right. The story is so good that I won't mind either way.

You have me riding a roller coaster. Now I am upset about the hunting talk. Why? Why? Why? Not only do I have a hard time understanding people who can willingly kill a beautiful animal - I especially don't understand those that are smug and boastful about it. It's reality. I now that. But it was jarring for me in the story. I suppose I should have recognized the foretelling with the hunting magazine that was mailed in the care package. Foretelling. It was one of my favorite words/concepts in reading/English class. :-) Jeez. I am all over the place. Hand me some of Alice's Midol.

I hate having to eat my words. I like Bella again. We are all allowed immaturity once in awhile. Even a one-time catty reviewer or just one that gets overly defensive for Edward.

Hmm. I actually liked this Bella until this chapter. She acted every bit of her age and less (way less) in this one. If I was Edward, I'd be regretting my vacation choice right about "yesterday."

So 2Cam...hi. FYI...I'm reading The Living Will. But lat week was kinda slow for post and I was caught up with all my stories. So as always, I browsed through my list of writers/stores to see what else they have written. And I cam across Sincerely Sergeant Masen under your list. WOW, I was hooked from Chapter one about a week ago. Have been reading pretty much everyday, from the time I get home til I got to bed. I couldn't stop reading. Your did an awesome job and glad I found it now, because I would have been dying waiting for your posts. TOtally understand RL comes into play alot and that sometimes you get writers block. BUT hey, So glad your finished. Looking forward to more of T.L.W as well. Good Job, Keep It up, I can see the improvement from one story to your next. HUGS

Looks like we have a new creepy character. So sad to see the soldiers head back to Iraq. Such a desolate place.

Lots of thoughts. The cliff was perfect. Bella breaking down, expected. Sad.