|Reviews for The Tragic Beginning|
| LoveFromNightmares 11/20/10 . chapter 1
awww! its...so... BEAUTIFUL! i keep reading it and reading it! i luv it :) keep up the good work!
| King Caspian the Seafarer 11/9/10 . chapter 1
Hurray! A Westmark Fanfiction!
This was very good-sad and chilling, and bringing again to mind the horrific murder of Theo's master. The way you used random (or not so random) words in a jarring sort of way adds to the effect beautifully. I love it. Write more if you get a chance. :)
Lion be with you,