awww! its...so... BEAUTIFUL! i keep reading it and reading it! i luv it :) keep up the good work!

xoxo,

melonlord88

(christy)

Hurray! A Westmark Fanfiction!

This was very good-sad and chilling, and bringing again to mind the horrific murder of Theo's master. The way you used random (or not so random) words in a jarring sort of way adds to the effect beautifully. I love it. Write more if you get a chance. :)

Lion be with you,

KC