|Reviews for The Condor And The Temptress|
| Kura-Tokiwa69 12/18/11 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this story! I liked how you gave the personalities to the different characters and it sort of suited them!
| argh4430 4/30/11 . chapter 1
As immature as the writing felt to me, I really liked this story. It even befits the point of view of the main character quite well. Even with the slow beginning, it manages to establish the characters' personalities and histories, especially the MC and her antagonist (Condor), well enough to get better appreciate the rest of the story (especially the lead-up to the climax, pun intended).
The one thing to punch up is a bit of the dialogue and one-dimensionality of the supporting characters, and possibly Condor as well. It almost didn't feel real enough compared to the protagonist and what the audience learns about her.