Kali: MUCH better ending than Vandalized Dreams.

Angel*sobbing hystericly* ?

Somebody Else*sniffles* it was beautiful! But did you know is messing up the format? it makes things a little tricky to read.

I nearly cried when I read this. My goodness, this is so sad. I don't mind Iori angst really, he's a complex guy. Keep on writing, please.

Kali: Wonderful angst factor. I liked that alot, but you could have had more gore and blood.

Angel*Sobbing* THAT WAS MEAN! HE DIED! WAAAAAAAA!

Somebody Else: I liked that. I'm thrilled to find a person who actually uses spell check in these things. Also, you have a wonderful plot. You should do a sequel about the funeral. It would be interesting to see how all his aquantances feel about this.

Angel
Angel*Gasp*sob*Gasp
Angel
Kali*hits Angel over the head and stuffs her in a near by closet where she shoved my straight kaizer muse for suggesting a fluf fic
Somebody ELse*Sigh* thank you.

may I use this on my site?