Awesome. Keep it up. Catch ya on the flip side.

I really enjoyed these shorts. By adding the pictures you made the introspection interesting.

great story

omg! I love your story! your a fantastic writer, and having adam have a sketchbook is brillant! PLEASE UPDATE!

I adore this story.

cute. much love.

I love this so far. Of course I'm going to read the next few chapters. Adding to favorites as well.

Amazing.

this was really good. any chance of a sequal?

Very touchng story. Me likes it a lot. You're a great writer!

GOD THAT IS THE VERY BEST FAN FIC I HAVE EVER READ I SWEAR

I found the idea very interesting and very plausible although I'm sure its not anything that disney had in mind when they made the movie. I thought you captured Adam and what he must have been going through throughout the movies very well.

You've captured your own side of Adam which is fantastic.

hey this is a cool story pls write more soon and when you do could you pls email me at
thanx-Kassi

I was absolutely certain I'd already reviewed this story, but it seems I was mistaken. If I could pick one word to describe this tale, it would be: Fantastic! This is unquestionably one of the best Mighty Ducks fics ever written. You do an incredible job of depicting Adam Banks and your portrayal of Charlie was also dead-on. This was an extremely well-written story, with a lot of very realistic angst. The beginnings of the emotional rebonding between Charlie and Adam, two people I always thought should be best friends, was beautiful. Please return to writing MD fanfic soon!

You just got to continue with this story, it's great. I really like it. They way you write things just reminds me of me sometimes.
I really like the story.