It's hard to find serious Assassins slash fiction. This may be the best example of it... anywhere. Czolgosz is my favorite character, and I had never thought of him being with John, but it's so cute! (I'm much more for Czolgosz and Goldman, myself. Unrequited love makes me happy.) This was so cute and very tragic. Keep up the good work!

Woah. That was so...awesome. I must repeat the "awe.
When I read the summary I was a little worried about the OOC aspect, but you did very well. It works.
How wonderful that I'm listening to the soundtrack as I speak. I wish more people would write fanfiction for this show. It's so amazing.

Great job!

I'm not much for man-to-man relationships, but thank God someone finally wrote Assassin fanfiction!1 I love you forever.

Huzzah! The only Assassins fanfiction here, and possibly in existance. You have my love!

I'm usually not a fan of slash, but I didn't mind this so much, maybe 'cause it's Assassins, and anything Assassins related is good for me! :D

Maybe next time, (if there is a next time,) you could include Booth? Or Guiteau? Or, oh man, Booth/Guiteau?
Hehe, I'm kidding! (Or am I?)

all right! An Assassins fic! A good one! Who! I Anyway. Write more! I really like it. A lot.)

Awwwwwwww...That's so sweet. But still a little odd. I like it. I was listening to the Assassins soundtrack when I thought to do a search. As I was reading "Ballad of Czolgosz" came on, it was weird. Actually Czolgosz had a scar on his cheek from working at a wire factory. (I did a report) Great story!

Very good I'm glad somebody wrote an assaians fic. Please write more

This was only your typical slash uninspired and "CATS" slash and "Pooh Bear"slash I read was far more imaginative than this fic.

woah. freaky... i liked it... nay... loved it.. there need to be more assassins fics out there... i applaude you... again. i loved this.. yay assasins...

I saw "Assassins" in the summary and had to read this. I like it. Great job! In my mind the time issue doesn't matter because as you said, they exist in a state of limbo so they can interact however they please as the rest of the world goes on. I absolutely adore this musical! Are there any more of these? I should do a search...

Very nice. Yay for Assassins fics! One of the most underappreciated shows ever! Slashing it is weird simply because of the time change notion, but still well done.