|Reviews for Immortal Lover|
| ShaySovereign 4/3/12 . chapter 1
Great entry. I will certainly be keeping up with this story. i too am from the story. i have always wanted to know about the whole crew. KMM is a great author.
| The Perfectly Imperfect One 3/4/12 . chapter 11
I really enjoyed this chapter :) and the others... I just am not logged in so I cannot review on my account this time.
| The Perfectly Imperfect One 3/3/12 . chapter 7
Great chapter! I am really enjoying this! :)
| The Perfectly Imperfect One 3/3/12 . chapter 2
Oh-oh-oh Ryo's got some interest surging.. ;) lole anyways, great chapter!
| The Perfectly Imperfect One 3/3/12 . chapter 1
I really liked this chapter! I really like Leni.
| FanFictionAddiction4EVER 10/6/11 . chapter 27
This is an amazing story! I wanna kniw what happens next! Please don't stop!
| thornton4ever 9/16/11 . chapter 27
I really enjoy reading this story. I am a huge huge fan of the Fever Series and I like your explanation about what Barrons and his 9 men are. Please continue writing, especially developing the story about Lor. Are you going to talk about Mac in more detail. Keep up the good work.
| Marissa K 7/27/11 . chapter 27
Please say that u have just had other things that have kept u away from the computer or from writing and that u have more! PLEASE! I NEED MORE!
| sj61 5/10/11 . chapter 27
I’m so happy that you’re back again with another chapter, I have really missed reading the story! It wasn’t any Ryodan/ Leni this time, but that’s OK, it’s good to get to know new characters. I felt so sorry for Annie, her mother too of course, no one of them had an easy life, but it must be terrifying for Annie that thought she had a quite normal life, and then realise that her dad really isn’t her dad, but a total stranger and he isn’t even human! She finds out that she’s alien too; it certainly has shaken her up a lot. It’ll be interesting to see how the daughter / mother relationship will develop from here and the father / daughter relationship too, it there ever will be one! I wonder when she has got everything in order and settled, who she will choose as a life mate, will it be one of Ryodan’s friends? Maybe that is for another story? Very good chapter, I’m looking forward to the next one!
| houri 5/7/11 . chapter 27
Great story with great character development. It had a really interesting spin on the Fever-U events, and good creativity on your own plot development.
Many of the chapters are good, but have even more potential to be better if some adjustments in the structure can be made. I.E. in some areas the writing seemed a bit rushed and stilted. To help with this some sentence restructuring and word choices/description changes would go a long way. Some of the explanations are too abrupt, so maybe a bit more expounding will help the story flow better. Overall, great work; I read this through in one sitting - so a few hours!, and was intrigued. I look forward to reading more of this story and seeing how you complete it, too.
| joanne 4/18/11 . chapter 26
wow i just found this and I love it. update plz, i prmise to review every time :)
| sj61 3/5/11 . chapter 24
I really loved this chapter; it’s so interesting and fun to get to know all the Draghar warriors and their life mates! Will we be able to get to know them all? I hope so! It was to sweet the love story between Monica and Tegner! It didn’t start out very well, but it turned out really good in the end! Tygir was another character that will be interesting to get to know! Will he meet his life mate too? It seems like that could be the case whether he wants it or not! She must be a very strong and stubborn woman to catch him! He probably will be very hard to get, or he will melt like butter in a frying pan when he sees her! It seems like you telling a new story in every chapter and we get to know new characters. It makes it so very interesting and I want to read more! :)
| sj61 2/21/11 . chapter 23
I do like that we get to know all the other girl friends; it’s interesting that they are all related somehow, even if it’s distant with some of them. I really start to like Danal more and more. It was so sad that his children couldn’t see him and the way he had lost his wife! I do hope that she will be able to come back in another life and that they will be able to meet again. Does the druid binding marriage work on fairies too? It would be great if it did then he could be together with Catriona again! The poor fairy prince needs some happiness in his life! I hope his children will be able to see him, if the curse disappears! It was a good thing that Ryodan and his friends could discover that Moria isn’t dead; she’s probably plotting away on some kind of revenge! I just wonder who the poor woman was that had to die in her behalf. I’m waiting with excitement for the next chappie! :)
| sj61 2/13/11 . chapter 22
I really love to get to know some other life mates to Ryodan’s friends, like Serina Mitchell ,she seems to be a interesting character. It’s interesting too that she knows her background that she has fae heritage and where she comes from. It’ll be interesting what she’ll add to the story! Are we going to get to know all the other life mates, like Kasteo’s new girl? I hope Zigor Barrons will have his life mate too, he needs some happiness too, the poor guy seems to be a very tragic character and right now he makes everyone else miserable. The life mates are going to be able to live longer too thanks to the elixir of life ,that’ll definitely change things for the draghar males since they’ll be able to have a happier future and not have to go through the grief of loosing their wives since humans normally has such a short life span. Good chapter, looking forward to more action!
| sj61 1/19/11 . chapter 18
I feel sorry for Jericho Barrons the more I get to know him, he seems to be a very lonely and unhappy guy. I do hope he will come to realise that he can’t get his dead wife back and that he can find happiness again. It would be interesting to know who the girl would be that Leni has seen that could capture his heart if he would just let go of the past! The premonitions that Leni has, seems to indicate that if they go back to wherever they are from the bad things will happen and both Jericho and Ryodan will die. I guess the dreams are telling Leni that what ever she does, she can’t let Ryodan leave Earth! The chapter was as romantic and sweet as I could ask for, He proposed! It would be good if they could get a break for a while, just total bliss, but I guess that won’t happen any time soon! Moria is lurking in the dark and all the unseelie creatures that want to kill them. Wow, they really are in for some tough times. I really loved this super romantic chapter!