|Reviews for Going Local|
| Niamh Cullen 2/13/11 . chapter 1
this was really good. well done!
| Debby-1957 2/7/11 . chapter 1
I enjoyed your story. Very well written and edited. I appreciate the ‘T’ rating, also. So, human Edward likes to sing in an empty train car. Kind of like singing in a stair well. I thought human Bella was very bold. And the description of the Poloriod camera as ancient was funny. I remember those from my youth. I remember record players, too. I have the Simon & Garfunkel album with the 59th street song. LOL. The whole story was good, but, they will get together eventually, right? Right. Of course! Thank you for this story.
| TangerSoto 2/4/11 . chapter 1
| UltravioletSpark 1/18/11 . chapter 1
:D That was adorable!
| theorange3 1/17/11 . chapter 1
That was wonderful. I can picture Edward tracking her down.
| Zesty T 1/16/11 . chapter 1
This is very cute. : )
I enjoyed reading it immensely.
| insanemum 1/13/11 . chapter 1
Very very sweet. Nice job :)
| shinzonx 1/13/11 . chapter 1
| Mary Alice 7 1/12/11 . chapter 1
Loved it! Have to agree with the campers at ADF, you should continue this!
| keyecullen 1/12/11 . chapter 1
Great one shot!
| JLPinNYC 1/12/11 . chapter 1
Saw the mention by you and Spangly on Twitter...can't resist the NYC connection. ;)
So cute...I could totally see more story...kind of like a serendipity thing.
| 10startledbirds 1/12/11 . chapter 1
This made me so happy. So happy.
| krisf16 1/12/11 . chapter 1
That was wonderful - but I want more! Any chance of another chapter or 2?
| Beans8272 1/12/11 . chapter 1
ah, that was very sweet! Thanks for sharing that ride on the train! :-)
| AngiJ 1/12/11 . chapter 1
That was such a sweet little story. If you developed this, there are so many ways this story could go. That's the beauty of it - it forces the reader to think. This really made me smile. So sweet :)