this was really good. well done!

I enjoyed your story. Very well written and edited. I appreciate the ‘T’ rating, also. So, human Edward likes to sing in an empty train car. Kind of like singing in a stair well. I thought human Bella was very bold. And the description of the Poloriod camera as ancient was funny. I remember those from my youth. I remember record players, too. I have the Simon & Garfunkel album with the 59th street song. LOL. The whole story was good, but, they will get together eventually, right? Right. Of course! Thank you for this story.

nice photograph))

:D That was adorable!

That was wonderful. I can picture Edward tracking her down.

This is very cute. : )

I enjoyed reading it immensely.

Very very sweet. Nice job :)

Cute one-shot!

Loved it! Have to agree with the campers at ADF, you should continue this!

Great one shot!

Keye

Saw the mention by you and Spangly on Twitter...can't resist the NYC connection. ;)

So cute...I could totally see more story...kind of like a serendipity thing.

Jenn

This made me so happy. So happy.

That was wonderful - but I want more! Any chance of another chapter or 2?

ah, that was very sweet! Thanks for sharing that ride on the train! :-)

That was such a sweet little story. If you developed this, there are so many ways this story could go. That's the beauty of it - it forces the reader to think. This really made me smile. So sweet :)