Oh, yeah you can't end Seth that's beyond unacceptable.. Soo glad you listened to IG's reasoning;-)

Loved this sooooo much!

Wow! That was a great fanfiction! I have read both princess bride and the entire twilight saga, multiple times for twilight saga, and I thought this was a great story that took the two and combined them awesomely! When it got to the part that said Edward was dead, I knew it wasn't real cuz I read princess bride, but I died a little inside anyways! This was sooooooo good! im very glad u kept Seth alive by the way!

Thankkkk youuuuu Irritable Grizzzly!

I'm still not sure what all this has to do with the Princess Bride. Hey, is Seth there so that Aro can convince Edward to join up? "Join and I'll let the spare go" seems to work on him.

Oh crumbs, is Aro going to mindslug out Edward's gift?

Ch. 7: Aaaaand Charlie's blind eye is opened. Hooray for soup.

Ch. 9: Hm. Well Chelsea's gift might not work on Seth, but there's still good old-fashioned Stockholm syndrome. The description of Edward underground is vivid.

Ch. 10: Aw crudbunnies. They're gonna wait until Edward's gone bibbledy and then try to feed Bella to him, right? Yup, there he goes.

Heh. In the movie, I wasn't paying that much attention to the music. I was just yelling, "Feathers! Feathers!"

Well this has been a very different take on the Volturi from my own, but Aro's "I will personally supervise their torment for a thousand years!" was quite immersive. The part with Carlisle showing up with the data did seem a little Deus ex Machina. Yes, we saw Nico on the roof, but we don't know how Carlisle found out about him.

I can picture Charlie's response to Edward's request to stay with Bella, "Okay, but if there's any funny business, YOUR HEAD WILL NOT BE THE ONLY THING THAT GETS RIPPED OFF."

And we get to see the word "piezoelectric" in a sentence. And do-gooder Carlisle will of course think "Maybe the rest of the vampires will convert to vegetarianism now!" and Emmett will go "Nah, they'll just invent dampeners or something."

HOLY CRUD, IT'S ADORABLE SETH! As in the guy who should have imprinted on Renesmee because that would have been five million times less weird.

"Quileutes aren't proper humans" Hm. I guess people from the turn of the century were a bit racist.

Oh, and Alice can't see the werewolves in her visions, so she can't see Edward now. I get it!

Informant?! Oh don't tell me it was Jasper. Crumbs...

No comma is necessary after an -ly adverb.

Did Demetri just respond to what Edward was thinking about the human on the plane?

I did like the lake-vaulting scene in the first chapter.

Oh, Edward, just call her number, wait for her to pick up and then hang up, leaving her to wonder who the pervert was, like a normal person!

I like the part about how vampire society would have reacted to the Cullens killing James under different conditions.

"Knowledge and instincts"? Isn't it more likely that the vampire-wary Quileutes just thought that Bella's vampire boyfriend had come back and chowed down on her fresia-scented tastyblood?

Crumbs! So Edward really is a dead smoke marionette?

Dun dun dun! Ordinarily I'd assume that "Edward was killed" is a fakeout that Carlisle had ready if Chief Swan called. However, I did just read your Siberian cloning story, so that might not be the case.

So I guess Edward didn't go Victoria hunting in this one? And they moved to Illinois instead of upstate New York?

Thank you!

Please...it can't be too late :/

Why hasnt E told Aro about the humans he 'heard'? That would keep him off their backs for a bit, I'd imagine

I thought that might happen. He didn't drain her yet, right?

That is torture! Ugh. But the wolves are there! :)

So... I was thinking Victoria took B for revenge but now I know she's dead. So is Seth? :(
Who were they hearing calling him? They both heard it, so another wolf? But how? Hmmm

I'm cofused over the shopping bit at the end