hi can u please make the next chapter... damn cliff hanger

Will you ever finish it i have been waiting for two months and i want to know what happens to Lacey

please please please write more this might have been added in 2010 or 2011 but i really want to know what happens

i know this was put up in like 2011 but we dont all have to beg our sisters to play on there ipod well at least i dont anymore but any way if you wrote any more please tell us or if you wrote in another website tell usthis is the best fanfiction i have ever read please write more

so this is how ur going 2 kill her? i'm confused

JERK! How dare you! GAHHHH! 'CHELLE!

Great job, even though I must bite you for that damn cliffhanger

this is really good, you did a good job of portraying lacey as insane. please update soon!

interesting, interesting :D

*drags you to your feet* GREATNESS!

its really good even tho i did not much care for the original series.

I have to say your writing skills are improving with every chapter! That's amazing! I like this internal conflict Mark has with his feelings toward Lacey, who is such a rebel, like him, but to the extreme. I wonder who her dad is, is it the president who hates thirds? That would be ironic. But poor Mark, he always is the one who gets hurt, hahaha. I can't wait for another chapter! You're doing a superb job.

LOVED!

except for the cliffhanger, i'm going to have to bring alexis back to life for that...*snaps fingers*

Love it! I just finished the series and I wanted it to keep going... I finished your chapters and I want it to keep going!

Well, i maxed out my PM thingy again :D i talk to way to many people...*facepalm* anyways, talk to you tomorrow 'chelle!

Yes, I definitely like this writing style better... the story is more easy to read and I can follow it better. But anyway, more importantly, I really like this story... Very entertaining and imaginitive. Mark is one of my favorite characters... and Matthew. I look forward to more chapters!